loved it but only because it had a cause and it was short sweet and straight to the point you did a good job with your personifcation. so overall u did a great job! :D and thats a good complement comming from me im like the simon cowell of this site :/
Verrrrry nice poem :). I like how you related the first and last lines. Though the touch may be exteriorly harmless, it does still linger and death ensues
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