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"They Wear The Mask"

Harmless touch lingers
Deceiving eyes watching you
Silent kiss of death




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AmorMoriturThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 10:03 pm:
love this. short, straight to the point, yet full of unspoken meanings and emotions
 
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TheUnwantedTruthThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 28, 2012 at 9:17 am:
loved it but only because it had a cause and it was short sweet and straight to the point you did a good job with your personifcation. so overall u did a great job! :D and thats a good complement comming from me im like the simon cowell of this site :/
 
Eclipse-of-the-Fiery-HeartThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 25 at 12:01 pm :
Lol..thanks so much:)
 
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L7SquariaNThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 5, 2012 at 11:23 pm:
Verrrrry nice poem :). I like how you related the first and last lines. Though the touch may be exteriorly harmless, it does still linger and death ensues
 
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jetta.bugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 5, 2012 at 5:35 pm:
Bee-yoo-tee-ful. Beautiful. Great job.
 
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