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I watch as they fall
How content they seem to be
Once they kiss the Earth

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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theatregirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 2 at 2:37 pm:
I like your poem but I only gave 3 star because it so short. The ideas should really be expanded upon
 
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Jan. 2 at 10:43 pm :
Thats whats called a haiku.
 
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WaffleOcean2934This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 1 at 6:32 pm:
Those are some very nice words!  Love it!
 
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ladybugsrockThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 1 at 5:56 pm:
I like the word choice you used! Ive never heard anyone describe rain like you did! Excellent! Please read, comment, and rate some of my poems too! I would appreciate it:) thanks
 
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CTS207This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 1 at 1:56 pm:
Short and to the point with imagry on top. Very nice
 
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