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Moving On MAG

September 29, 2008
By Anonymous

I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today

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justsmileanddance PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 12 2010 at 4:00 pm
justsmileanddance PLATINUM, Montgomery, Alabama
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Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.<br /> -Albus Dumbledore

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 me too!!! 
sparksfly BRONZE said...
on Dec. 11 2010 at 8:38 pm
sparksfly BRONZE, Port Monmouth, New Jersey
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In a world filled with hate, we must still dare to love. - Michael Jackson

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To put it simply, I love it.
jaygonz BRONZE said...
on Nov. 26 2010 at 12:36 pm
jaygonz BRONZE, Hialeah Gardens, Florida
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Don&#039;t make someone a priority, when they only make you an option.

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yes, but in the second line, she can just delete the "that" and just leave it as : "out all the poems i wrote", it just flows better, don't you think ?
Hope_Allie SILVER said...
on Nov. 4 2010 at 11:10 pm
Hope_Allie SILVER, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Words. Solitary groups of letters, added together to express on page your emotion. Love in ink. Pain in pen.-Paul Putman

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oh my gosh...wow this is exactly what im trying to do.....throw out everything that reminds me of him. its just so hard to let go of my work.....its a small piece of myself. LOVED THIS!
paperflowers said...
on Oct. 7 2010 at 7:26 pm
paperflowers, Imaginary, Indiana
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Nice poem, but did you notice that the third line is 8 syllables? idk if there are official rules for a haiku or not but I was just wondering if you knew that.
pnkninja11 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 6 2010 at 7:19 am
pnkninja11 BRONZE, Partlow, Virginia
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I like every part of this poem. It is very meaningful and I can relate.
Gisah said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 7:37 am
I definitly can relate with you.
paty said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 7:37 am
was amazing because that was short but significate so much in the life of each other
LiVeLaUgHlOvE__ GOLD said...
on Sep. 25 2010 at 10:47 pm
LiVeLaUgHlOvE__ GOLD, Geneva, New York
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Less is more
jsdfhodfu said...
on Sep. 21 2010 at 10:58 am
well htis poem is very nice
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2010 at 9:35 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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short but very meaningful!!!!!!1
the_real_reggie_rocket BRONZE said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 7:46 am
the_real_reggie_rocket BRONZE, Spostylvania, Virginia
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&quot;I like to move it, move it.&quot;-Anonymous

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Aaaaaaaaaaa-men :)

I can definately relate.

BrittDawn PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 28 2010 at 12:50 am
BrittDawn PLATINUM, Winnipeg, Other
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That is so true.
silence-is-loud GOLD said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 12:35 pm
silence-is-loud GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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lol. very clever
silence-is-loud GOLD said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 12:34 pm
silence-is-loud GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY, STING LIKE A BEE- MUHAMMID ALI

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very true... even though it was only like 9 words... it hit me. hard.. looovvve it. 5 stars
blondie13 GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 7:42 pm
blondie13 GOLD, Ewa Beach, Hawaii
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Sometimes a few words can say a million things
KelsieYellow said...
on Aug. 12 2010 at 11:00 am
Short but totally relatable. 
PenguinFeet GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 2:00 pm
PenguinFeet GOLD, Bellevue, Washington
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&quot;Yeah, well, who but the mad would choose to keep on living? In the end, aren&#039;t we all just a little crazy?&quot; - Dulcie, in Libba Bray&#039;s Going Bovine

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"I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today"

--except this poem. Oh, irony!

But very nice.

BlackAngelWings PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 5:07 pm
BlackAngelWings PLATINUM, Venice, Florida
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New Moon - S. Meyer <br /> &#039;I flung my leg over the edge and ram through the knee deep water, it sprays all around me. &quot;Edward!&quot; I yell knowing it is useless. The crowd is too loud and my voice is breathless with exsertion. But I couldn&#039;t stop screaming.&#039;

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I'm gonna take a guess and say they were about a boy.
KICK3593 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:15 pm
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
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It's nice - kind of funny, too - but I think it's left to a lot of loose interpretation.