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Moving On MAG

September 29, 2008
By Anonymous

I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today



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on Dec. 15 2009 at 5:29 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

i agree wit scarlet. the shortest poemz can be so deep. gr8 job

on Dec. 15 2009 at 2:46 pm
scarletP SILVER, East Lansing, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A smart girl listens but doesn&#039;t believe, kisses but doesn&#039;t love and leaves before she is left.&quot; <br /> -- Marilyn Monroe

its amazing how the simpilest poems have the deepest meanings. nicely done

on Dec. 8 2009 at 11:29 am
S3xL!pz911 BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Even in the loudest crowd I will hear your voice asking for my forgiveness

Wow. Great job. So powerful

on Oct. 8 2009 at 3:06 pm
mellow_melon PLATINUM, Jefferson, Maryland
41 articles 14 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but my the number of moments that take our breath away.&quot;

nice poem!! i love how well it gets the feeling across in just the three lines! good job!

JackXD SILVER said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:28 pm
JackXD SILVER, Houston, Texas
9 articles 15 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
this may not be a quote but i really love the lyrics-Trust in me the way I trusted you I know we could have done this together If you believed in me like I believed in you My heart would be forever in your hands-all that remains-forever in your hands

awesome poem! it is very good!

DW SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 6:38 pm
DW SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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I think ur second line has 8 syllables instead of 7 but its really good!!!

on Aug. 8 2009 at 7:39 pm
Vindictive_Love BRONZE, Abq, New Mexico
1 article 5 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Talent wins games, but teamwork and intelligence wins championships. <br /> Michael Jordan <br /> <br /> Whatever you do in life, will be insignificant, but it&#039;s very important that you do it.<br /> Mahatma Ghandi

haha short yet strong. i wish i could be this strong. maybe beccause of you i will get around to doing it. thanks! lol

on Aug. 8 2009 at 3:52 pm
apgirl94 SILVER, Allen Park, Michigan
6 articles 1 photo 2 comments
Verrry good, its short but it shows soo much (:

on May. 9 2009 at 4:31 pm
GreenWriter826 PLATINUM, McAllen, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039;Their fruits like honey to the throat <br /> But poison in the blood&#039;&#039; - Christina Georgina Rossetti &quot;Goblin Market&quot;

short and just as meaning full as a full novel...bravo...

adriana said...
on Apr. 8 2009 at 5:19 pm
short sweet and simple but yet it says alot good job :)

E.Lee GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2009 at 7:44 pm
E.Lee GOLD, Akron, Ohio
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really short..but has a ton of meaning...i like it!

and i can totally relate too..moving on is hard. but forgetting is even harder!!

on Mar. 12 2009 at 10:31 pm
psycholinzmeier GOLD, Kaukauna, Wisconsin
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tht had to be so hard. i want to throw away the poems i wrote about a guy but im to scared. congrates on doing so.

on Mar. 3 2009 at 1:00 am
CrazyRocker4Life BRONZE, Lacey, Washington
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments
Congrats!

I need to get the guts to do that ASAP...

on Mar. 2 2009 at 4:32 pm
EternityBroken GOLD, Hooker, Oklahoma
17 articles 2 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is impossible to love and be wise.

painful, i can never bring myself to throw out the poems that hurt me so. i'm glad u can tho. insperational work

Arden22 said...
on Feb. 21 2009 at 9:15 pm
I like poems like these that say less and mean more. :) It's harder then most people think.

[Poet]. BRONZE said...
on Feb. 19 2009 at 4:12 pm
[Poet]. BRONZE, Belleville, Illinois
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NiCe...buTt.. [iDonT geT iT!]

bRonwYn_e GOLD said...
on Feb. 15 2009 at 4:12 pm
bRonwYn_e GOLD, Bon Aqua, Tennessee
19 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Denial is expected in the face of puuure eeevil.

YOU GO GIRL! :-D

rierie. said...
on Feb. 4 2009 at 1:10 am
that's so weird.

I was just thinking the same.

:)

good good.

Cindy (: said...
on Jan. 30 2009 at 9:11 pm
Great Job (:

abc said...
on Jan. 29 2009 at 8:27 pm
Brave!