Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Sunday Morning
Shahed
Thrush
Ellie:)hey can you check out some of my new poems i just put on.?
Earth is falling
the truth
result
holocaust
[cheers]
i was thinking...
impossible to answer
does anyone really know?
we will pay
speak up
snippits
Earth is falling
the truth
result
holocaust
[cheers]
i was thinking...
impossible to answer
does anyone really know?
we will pay
speak up
snippits
Laughing5I always love a short sweet poem like this! im a sucker for simplicity! :) it's pretty though! <3
SabrinahcoAs a coffe fanatic, I have to say I love this :D
Short and sweet. I saw another poem, and I think they were trying to copy your style. (Instead of Sunday it was Friday, the my dear part was the same, and something about a thousand nights of fame.) :)
Can you check out my work too? I wrote a new poem called Best friends, and so far I haven't gotten much viewers then myself. I really appreciate any comments too. :)
Can you check out my work too? I wrote a new poem called Best friends, and so far I haven't gotten much viewers then myself. I really appreciate any comments too. :)
Oh really, where did you see that poem? I suppose mimicking is the sincerest form of flattery ;]
i love this! short and sweet! check out my work?
Short and sweet. I saw another poem, and I think they were trying to copy your style. (Instead of Sunday it was Friday, the my dear part was the same, and something about a thousand nights of fame.) :)
Can you check out my work too? I wrote a new poem called Best friends, and so far I haven't gotten much viewers then myself. I really appreciate any comments too. :)
Can you check out my work too? I wrote a new poem called Best friends, and so far I haven't gotten much viewers then myself. I really appreciate any comments too. :)
wArm_FuZzies said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 6:53 pm:
Jan. 29, 2010 at 6:53 pm:
I personally think haikus are hard to write because you have to bring out so much in only seventeen syllables. This one really touched my heart and I think you captured a near-perfect (I say this because nothing is ever perfect) haiku.
earthy_kat
fiftiesgal467
xsummer_rainxWow, I really like this. Short but nice. :)
Dancethethread said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 5:02 pm:
Jan. 19, 2010 at 5:02 pm:
Absolutely Wonderful. I wish to write it on my wall
MercuryIsn't a haiku supposed to have 7 syllables in the 1st and last line and 5 syllables in the middle? Nice words though... very pretty. :)
Hawkberry
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