Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Sunday Morning
Mercury
Isn't a haiku supposed to have 7 syllables in the 1st and last line and 5 syllables in the middle? Nice words though... very pretty. :)
A haiku is most definitely 5, 7, 5 ^_^ (I would know, I wrote it xD).
oxStardustxoIn just a sentence, it refreshed me. It's really good <3
sasssgirrrl22
FrySnickerdoodle
A.Cross
snc947lol, i luv it. usually the things i read on here are so long but just one sentence to read is refreshing. good job!
ChowDhaha, good job on getting rated # one on one sentence!!
it is cute :]
it is cute :]
ciaobella57
GirlWithWings56
.jess.h.I don't understand the meaning of this poem. Is it like the person gives you energy...or what?
Or maybe it could mean that this person is warm and refreshing, something to savour and enjoy? Maybe. :)
poet unknown said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 3:55 pm:
Oct. 24, 2009 at 3:55 pm:
that was short and sweet and i get it. ingenius.
L.G. smiles said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 7:33 pm:
Oct. 2, 2009 at 7:33 pm:
Really great metaphor! It sounds very original, which is a good thing.
monkeyfeet2
Infortuneshand !. I loved that! That was amazing, it sounds like it could have been written by a famous Japanese poet...
kryslingsimple and well written. i like the down to earth simile, its not all done up like most haikus. excellent job.
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