Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Sunday Morning
TheWhiteFlower
small poem yet so big in definition
GOOD JOB!!!!
sunriseusnseti like how one verse flows into the next! great job(:
happybunny
MiaCaroline
emilybwriteswow big impact for 15 syllables....please ccheck out my poem "Forgotten Domain" and comment/rate it thanks:)
poetrylyricsGreat Job. Straight to the fact. Check out my first poem. I love critiques. : )
MeaghanSeesStars
It's a haiku of course its gonna be short
StrugglingPoetSo simply you said what others have trouble relaying by the end of an entire novel. Congratulations on making an emotion that sparks something in others.
Shahaad_TheCreatorSo warming, and unique! GREAT WORK!
soldoutVery, very short. But hey, simple is the star.
JesusLoverYou right, but its very good! Even if its short its still good!!!
StarGazer453Simple but right to the point! I enjoyed the message of being with your sweetheart and loving every moment. :)
S. said...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 7:57 pm:
Sept. 28, 2011 at 7:57 pm:
I really like how short it is. simplicity is a rarity these days ;)
tianna123 said...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 1:35 pm:
Sept. 26, 2011 at 1:35 pm:
aww, ths is cuute !
jasont727Lovely. Simple yet gets the message across very elegantly.
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