little haiku poem
bouncing around in my head
messes up my hair.
bouncing around in my head
messes up my hair.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
2britt13What a good way to say something in not a lot of words!
this is very true! i really like your poem
;-)
;-)
tomtamtimmy
jeanwolflove is very nice.
and poem can be used as 1or2 so if you ust as one, this is a proper hiku.
and poem can be used as 1or2 so if you ust as one, this is a proper hiku.
randomgirl721997 said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 6:49 pm:
Dec. 8, 2009 at 6:49 pm:
umm well this was good but the first line has 6 instead of 5
IzzyPop
DirtySweatpants
sammyso3Never mind [: the dictionary says it's two syllables.
CrazyPencilGirlum isnt it supposed to be 5, 7, 5 (in terms of syllables) not 6,7,5? But I still think that this is a really great poem.
poem can either be a two or one, several words are like that, i, for instance pronounce poem- poem, instead of po-em.
hawkfireRealy?
i didnt know that
i thought it could only be po-em
i didnt know that
i thought it could only be po-em
shellbi123
luv it!! u put a nice twist on a typically deep and thoughtful kind of poetry
nicole123this pome made me giggle the first time i read it i thought it was cute
SaraB.That is so cute and just plain awesome. Good use of personification!
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