If Life Were A Wish...

I liked it a lot; it was short and to the point but withheld a deeper meaning. i agree with dolphincrazy226. It's a challenge to do that, but you managed it fairly well. Good job and I hope to continue reading more of your work.

they say short poems are the hardest to write because you have to much to say, and yet need to pack it all down.  kudos to you, you did a great job keeping the rhyme scheme up with the rythm. and the message rings clear:)  though i do question that last word "dished"  i know it might have been hard to find a rhyme, but it just doesn't fit with the rest of the poem, but the imagery is sound:)  great job and keep writing!

they say short poems are the hardest to write because you have to much to say, and yet need to pack it all down.  kudos to you, you did a great job keeping the rhyme scheme up with the rythm. and the message rings clear:)  though i do question that last word "dished"  i know it might have been hard to find a rhyme, but it just doesn't fit with the rest of the poem, but the imagery is sound:)  great job and keep writing!

Well...the idea definately has merit it in. It could use a little work, but I like how you put it. 4/5 stars

coolio i think it was rather intresting.

To be honest, the rhyming is, well, not so good in this. The premisce is good, I just think it could be more flushed out that it is.

thats really good..its short and sweet and rhymes

This is great.  and a good way to sshow that you enjoy what you have in life.

You're rather cynical!  But sometimes its best to be happy with what we have.  I like your rhythm; you could almost put it to music.     

Very Nice, I really like it! :) Paige