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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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Swa.Swara.Vismaya said...
today at 10:34 am:
Its just beautiful!!! I relate to it so well!! You have amazing talent and please keep writing!!
 
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FallenAngel170198This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 6:49 am:
Just awesome :) love it
 
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Morgan M. said...
Apr. 1 at 2:48 pm:
This literally brought tears to my eyes. It was so beautiful.
 
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The_girl_at_her_deskThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 3 at 2:11 pm:
i remember being so terribly impressed by this piece that i was trying to learn it, so hat i ould recie it to my friends in school. great work...!
 
LonleydandyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 17 at 5:15 pm :
Oh my gosh, thank you soooo much! 
 
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Lawless-FlameRoseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 11 at 3:23 pm:
this is an incredible peace of work i can learn something from you.
 
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LiveToBelieveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 18, 2012 at 8:18 am:
I love the way you layed this out. It just makes this piece amazing. telented you are! I love this
 
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sarahnicole7 said...
Sept. 16, 2012 at 3:14 pm:
this is jst truly amazing<3 xo keep it up
 
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Ruby-Paige-RoseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 3, 2012 at 1:43 pm:
I felt like I was looking into 2 sets of eyes. Extrordinary work.
 
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spencyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 10, 2012 at 1:20 pm:
NICE,VERY NICE...PLZ VISIT ME BACK AND COMMENT TELL ME WAT U THINK OF MY WORKS..TX
 
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Indilove said...
Apr. 23, 2012 at 8:10 am:
This is so deep and amazing and relatable and just omg its awesome!!!! great great fantastic work!!!
 
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Vackoe said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 11:31 am:
Amazing, I'm a dark person but I loved this! Great job! (:
 
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CammiThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 1, 2012 at 10:10 pm:
I loved the writing :) I would love to hear this with music 
 
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miranda13 said...
Apr. 1, 2012 at 1:35 pm:
i love this its very beatuful and i think your really good at writing.. keep it up.
 
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fiNd_THe_fLaMEThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 24, 2012 at 2:22 pm:
Way to go! This poem is great, and I can relate easily! People dont know how much they give away in their eyes and expressions. I really hope u get published in the magazine! Please check out my work: the monsrosity fame, black flame, bloody rose, mistress of the ice flowers, battle of the lamb
 
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-_sunlight_-This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 5:52 pm:
...............................<3
 
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its.paigee said...
Feb. 12, 2012 at 6:31 am:
Very deep and open! When you write something people can relate to,You know you've done good! Good job!
 
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AlexisNicole822 said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 10:49 am:
Whoa. I can relate to this poem at some points such as, "I look into your eyes And I can see secrets That you’ve hidden from me And have willingly kept I look into your eyes And I can see the lies That you poured down my throat And that you showed to my eyes" Very well written. Most definitely a favorite of mine
 
LonleydandyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 17 at 5:16 pm :
Thanks :)            
 
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Keenal M. said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 9:17 am:
Amazing! So glad this was the first song I'm reading since signing up to TeenInk.
 
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