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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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babybunny This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 7:32 am:
i wasn't accussing u of copying lol. i was just kind of...wats teh rite word...musing how alike they sounded
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 7:38 pm :
Ummkay, hahaha. Yeah, I suppose they are rather similar.
 
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babybunny This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 7:35 am:
this sounds a lot like the one i posted a while ago....it wasa  song 2....
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 8:22 pm :
SOrry if it sounded the same. It is all my work though, I didn't copy any of yours......
 
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we_are_sunscientists said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 6:06 pm:
Eeryone on this page ask yourself the following question: "what makes this piece good?"
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 6:23 pm :

Do you not like it?

 

 
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HisBaby said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 8:27 am:
great peom i loved it.. reminded me of my fiancee kinda sorta
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 6:23 pm :
Wow, fiancee? Congratulations! [Thanks, by the way].
 
FriggiThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 12, 2011 at 9:08 am :
gorgeaous  shows all sides of love
 
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steph95 said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 7:47 am:
amazing!!! keep on writting!!!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 6:22 pm :
Thanks, and I will!
 
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D_Beauty said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 7:07 am:
This poem was amazing. I enjoyed reading it. Creative. Keep up the good work! 
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 6:21 pm :
Thanks so much!!! I really appreciate that!
 
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babyblue16 said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 2:31 pm:
This poem is wonderful! Keep writing.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 6:21 pm :
Thank you!!!
 
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Lonleydandy said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 10:21 am:
I used to be going through this...hahaha. Not so much anymore though! I pretty much got over the feelings I had for this guy.
 
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sushiluvrluvzme said...
Oct. 29, 2010 at 3:15 pm:
Your poem is good and also,it got kind of annoying when you keep saying "I look in your eye" but I still think your poem is lovely though :)
 
CowanQueen replied...
Oct. 31, 2010 at 3:50 pm :
I really love this. Its beautiful and I competely understand. Are you going through this too?
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 10:22 am :
I used to be going through this...hahaha. Not so much anymore though! I pretty much got over the feelings I had for this guy.

Thanks :D

 
CowanQueen replied...
Nov. 8, 2010 at 5:48 pm :
how I really need advice. Its really driving me crazy.
 
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