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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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Emilia901 said...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 12:09 pm:
Wow this song was just amazing! It was really heart warming and I just loved it so much!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 8:44 pm :
Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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iloveyou123 said...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 6:05 pm:
I cant even explain how utterly amazing an touching this was i honestly think this is soo amazing i wish i couldd tell the writeer how briliant they really are this is wonderful an full of feeling whoever this is towards must be so touched that someone cared so much about them to write not just song lyrics but the most intense an heartwarming lyrics i think i have really everr heard
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 6:12 pm :

Aww, thanks!!! 

P.S. I showed it to the person, and they loved it…they just didn't know that it was for them!!!!!

 
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iamalwaysmyself said...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 11:49 am:
i understand it so well cause i went through it not to long ago. well done well done
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 6:11 pm :
Thank you!!!
 
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ashley1 said...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 7:46 am:
This is very touching and beyound incredible.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 6:12 pm :
Thanks so much!
 
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Holliee said...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 12:31 pm:
simple amazing babe :) <3 love it.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 5:36 pm :
Thanks :D               
 
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broken_red_wagon said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 8:20 pm:
This is really beautiful. It's so deep, yet anyone call relate to it.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 5:35 pm :
:D Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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SamanthaBarwick said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 6:59 pm:

I realllllllllly like this.  I love how you put it, like, neither of you is perfect and you both keep secrets, but overall you still can love each other. My favvvvvorite part is,

"I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart"

 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 5:35 pm :
Thanks so much!!!!!!!!!
 
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pnkninja11 said...
Sept. 3, 2010 at 7:34 am:
I like they way how you expressed your emotions in remarkable words. My favorite part of this was when you said "You look into my eyes And you see a girl Who is afraid To let you in her world" I can relate to this.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 7:35 am :
Hahaha, yeah, I could when I wrote it as well. Thanks :D
 
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Megz .. said...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 8:01 pm:

Excuse me Lonleydandy, but I was wondering if I could wright a song using some parts of this song? I think this poem is amazing! its one of the best poems Iv ever read on here!

Thank you,

Megz=)

 
Lonleydandy replied...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 9:11 pm :
It just kind of depends. I would prefer that if you were to use any of my poem, that you would credit me for it. If you were also going to use some of it, then could you send me a link when it is done? Thanks!
 
Megz .. replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:12 pm :

thats kinda what i meant=)thank you! i read this poem at school and i loved it! its really good! keep up the good workk...and once i finish the song i will send you a link:))) thanks so much!

-megz=)

 
Lonleydandy replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 2:16 pm :
Sure thing! I'm looking forward to seeing it!
 
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