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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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Megz .. said...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 8:01 pm:

Excuse me Lonleydandy, but I was wondering if I could wright a song using some parts of this song? I think this poem is amazing! its one of the best poems Iv ever read on here!

Thank you,

Megz=)

 
Megz .. replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 7:50 pm :
ill prolly get started on it some time this week...this wont be the first song iv ever writen but i hope it will be the best!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 9:50 pm :
Okay, cool!
 
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Squirt21 said...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 10:01 am:
awww! that was very cute! i loved it
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 2:35 pm :
Thanks so much!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 2:36 pm :
I'll check out some of your work today as well.
 
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Cajsim said...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 9:00 am:
Please Read and Rate! http://teenink.com/poetry/song_lyrics/article/231450/Tender-Hands/
 
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Cajsim said...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 8:59 am:

Please read and Rate! C. Jeffreys

http://teenink.com/poetry/song_lyrics/article/231450/Tender-Hands/

 
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talking-with-silence said...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 5:41 pm:
That was sweetness!
 
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xovanillatwilightxo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 11:04 pm:
This is so beautiful and touching! Please check out my work I would really appreciate it =] Write on! <3
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 7:24 am :
Thanks! Sure, I'll look at some of it!
 
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dreamxentertain This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 12:21 pm:
i really like your song! the beginning is my favorite part :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 3:32 pm :
Thanks so much!!!!! I'll be sure to check out some of your work too!
 
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Lonleydandy said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 1:05 pm:
You too? I hate that, it just makes having a balanced orchestra that much harder! We lost all of our seniors this year [off to college] so we are ten people short...hahahaha.
 
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RainyDayz said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 9:38 pm:
im sorry, but i couldnt help noticing that you said you played violin? thats so cool. i play viola. nice to meet ya. :
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jul. 5, 2010 at 8:43 pm :
Yes, yes I do play the violin...it's one of the things that makes me happy sometimes! I'm glad to meet you as well, one of my best friends is a violist. Hahaha, it almost makes me laugh how few of them there really are!!!!! I went back to my old middle school orchestra director, and she told me there are 27 incoming violins, and NO violas!!!! Imagine that :D
 
RainyDayz replied...
Jul. 5, 2010 at 9:54 pm :
haha yes i can imagine. we had twenty violinist and three violist lol. we started to run out of violinsand people ended up sharing. lol
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 7:34 am :
Wow!!! Hahaha, I hope it gets better next year!
 
RainyDayz replied...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 11:41 am :
Lol i hope so :), but i doubt it. Alot of people are thinking about quitting orchestra next year.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 1:06 pm :

UGH I hate when I do that! I hit the "New comment" button instead of "Reply" GAH! Well anyway, here's what I was going to say!

You too? I hate that, it just makes having a balanced orchestra that much harder! We lost all of our seniors this year [off to college] so we are ten people short...hahahaha.

 
RainyDayz replied...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 1:47 pm :
I was thinking about it, but i relized part of me wanting to quit was just because all my friends were leaving. Then i remembered how much i really loved to play viola and i think im going to stay in it. :D
 
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