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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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Annabelle294 said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 10:08 am:
This is amazing, i really enjoyed reading it
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 8:54 pm :
Thank you so much!, I'll be sure to look at some of your work!
 
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CLC93 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 7:06 pm:
Wow this is really good. I think it would be cool to hear this song put to music! :D
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 3:21 pm :
Hahaha, thanks so much!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 3:21 pm :
It has a "melody" like thing to it, but it is more of a poem than a song, so I need to find better music for it!
 
CLC93 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 23, 2010 at 7:47 am :
You're welcome. :)
 
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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 7:39 am:
wow, this is so good!!! amazing!!! wow, i can feel the emotion that you put into this!! just wow, awesome job!!! i would love it if you would check out some of my work!!!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 8:04 am :
Haha, thanks....I thought that I had already replied to this....but okay..hahaha, I checked out your work, and most of it is pretty good!
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 5:32 pm :
thankyou!! :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 11:59 am :
Sure thing :D
 
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Anjo! said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 2:22 pm:
HOLY FREAKIN CRAP!!! this is... AMAZING!!!! i couldnt start reading this and when i first started reading this i got this spurt of emotion from out of the blue.... like i could feel your heart through the words. Wow, you are a truly amazing writer if you can show me that through a poem. I'm so glad that you wrote on my first chapter of my book! you have given me inspiration again and i need that!! thank you!!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 5:16 pm :
Haha, thank you sooooo much!!!!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 5:17 pm :
And I'm so glad that I could help you get started on you story again!!!! When you publish more, you MUST let me know!!
 
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love2run said...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 6:58 pm:
Oh my gosh, i totally know how that is! It really sucks, but it is great inspiration for a lot of poems i have written!! Great job, that was amazing!!!!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 6:26 am :
Thanks!                               
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 6:27 am :
LUCKILY! I got over my inspiration, no more sad summers for this girl :D
 
love2run replied...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 11:24 am :
haha that's awesome, me too!! hey maybe you could check out some of my writing??
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 1:55 pm :
Haha, I have! You are a pretty good writer yourself!!!!
 
love2run replied...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 2:26 pm :
haha thanks!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 10:14 pm :
Sure thing!!!
 
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Ninten1992This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 12:49 pm:
You're really talented, please keep writing!
 
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