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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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sunshine7223 said...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 3:45 pm:
I LOVED this! :) You are seriously so talented! Please keep writing! I loved your rhyme scheme. I loved everything about this! I can feel the emotion! :))) WONDERFUL job!
 
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Chibi-Alexis said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 8:08 am:
This explains me so well, I almost cried.  Extremely beautiful.
 
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botdfThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 3:10 pm:
wow that is so amazing, it sounds like something that would be a nation-wide hit!!! you are an amazing writer.
 
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ninjanessieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 1:17 pm:
you blew my mind away! it s AMAZING!
 
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BridgetND said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 8:23 am:
this was amazing! <3
 
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Born2Dancex3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 7:50 pm:
wow breath taking amazingly beautiful LOVE ITTT
 
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DannehBoi said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 3:03 pm:
I LOVE this! <3
 
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poemgirl. said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 11:40 am:
Apsolutely amazing, i think this may be the best poetry yet... 
 
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irishlass317This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 8:47 pm:
OMG!!!!!!!! AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-)
 
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Dimand_Tears. said...
Oct. 20, 2011 at 9:41 pm:
this is beautiful. And i find it so amazing that you find the time to take your brian and useit in such way. i love poetry.
 
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JackieSutton This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 10:58 pm:
This is great!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Oct. 9, 2011 at 10:28 am :
Thanks!         
 
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ThePeaceDaisy said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 8:49 pm:
I like the idea of the list of 100 themes. It would get me writing/drawing..anyways, love this poem!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 9:34 pm :

Yeah, I haven't really had time to work on mine or anything....but I really loved the challenge!

 

Thanks!

 
LazyDaisyLovesYou replied...
Oct. 9, 2011 at 10:13 am :
No problem!
 
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HeavenlyXD said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 2:20 pm:
This elegant beautiful I love the flow u have great talent!(:
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 9:34 pm :
Thanks so much!
 
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clarinetchick said...
Sept. 21, 2011 at 5:32 pm:
All I have to say is WOW. That is AMAZING. I almost cried. :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 21, 2011 at 7:36 pm :
Awwwwww! Thank you soooooo much!
 
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Alex said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 11:11 am:
Very Nice!! :)
 
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