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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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ChicaHUHH?! said...
Dec. 1, 2009 at 8:24 am:
I absolutely LOVE this.
It's the honest truth about most
people.
Keep writing [:
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Dec. 1, 2009 at 4:52 pm :
Thank you sooo much!!!!!!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Dec. 1, 2009 at 4:53 pm :
I will....haha, I have written sooo much so far...hahaha.....anyway, Thanks again!
 
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BloodForInk said...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 11:57 am:
your right this is amazing
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 11:58 am :
Hahaha, I never said it was amazing, I just said people seemed to like it..haha
Thanks though!
 
BloodForInk replied...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 2:15 pm :
I know you didn't, I did silly
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 3:49 pm :
haha...nice
 
BloodForInk replied...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 5:56 pm :
I do that lol
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 7:00 pm :
hahaha, yah, I do that A LOT..haha
 
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distant_dreamer said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 1:16 pm:
Wow, I totally am in love with this song!!! It could be the new hit single! Lol :) You are really talented!!! Keep it up! :) Btw, 2 things, if you get the chance check out my song You're Mine, and how did you get the idea to write this song???? :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 4:41 pm :
Thank you sooo much!!!!!!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 4:43 pm :
Hahaha, thanks. I will check out your song!!, dont' worry! Haha, he idea to write it, I am participating in the 100 themes challenge, where you have to do something for every theme that they give you. This one was eyes. I had painted a picture, and was going to digitally scan it in, but my scanner had a spasm. I knew I could probably write something way better than I could draw..haha...I was right! OH, and this guy, yah, he was part of my inspiration too....haha. Thanks!!
 
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purplegiirl24 said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 7:47 pm:
this is so sweet !! it's liike everything ii have been trying to say and ii just couldnt. ii think iim going 2 cry because these words or so true. "it's like what more could ii do buht sit here, wait and just be true"
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 7:52 pm :
Thank you so much!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 7:54 pm :
And just for the record, I haven't had the guts to say any of this..haha.....I still don't, and I recently found out, he's moving away next year [fantastic, right..] god, haha. I wish I had the guts to say it though. If he actually doesn't show up next year... I might..hahahaha, so I won't ever have to see him again. Anyway, thanks so much!
 
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~Reaa.Mae~ said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 11:35 am:
Heyy. Nice work. I really liked it. Keep up the good work, imo. Look me up when you put new stuff up. :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 5:30 am :
Thanks!!!! and don't worry. I will!!!!!
 
linds replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 8:47 am :
I love this poem. It has alot of great sayings in it, and actually tells you about many feelings! If you actually understand it, it has a great meaning to it..
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 4:27 pm :
Thanks!!!!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 5:17 pm :
Yah, it has a lot of meaning behind it. Haha, I mean, it makes it a lot easier if you know who I am talking about...haha...personal  stuff ......
 
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Rochelle said...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 7:38 pm:
Ah, this was so good! There's no doubt why it wouldn't be voted number one. TWICE! Keep on writing, because, HECK, I love reading your works! d:
 
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