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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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authormercedes said...
Jun. 23, 2011 at 8:31 am:
I think it is a lovely poem. There were a few lines that I thought could use some improvement (but if there is onething i have learned it is that there is always room for improvement). But I really enjoyed it and I hope you keep up the good work!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 23, 2011 at 1:20 pm :

Thanks so much! I do appreciate your critique and couldn't agree with you more! Nothing's perfect, so it can always be improved.


Thanks!!!!

 
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socr_chick28 said...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 6:06 pm:
Undeniably AMAZING! I am literally in an identical situation, and it reminds me of poems that i wrote, except better!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 8:17 am :
Wow!!! Thank you sooo much!
 
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hailey.prainito said...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 4:18 pm:
I find it nice to know that I'm not alone when it comes to the situation in ehich you wrote. I absolutly love this; keep it up
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 8:16 am :
Thank you! I'll try, but I'm kind of in a writer's block for poetry right now..hahahaha, thank you though!
 
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Mushymushymoo said...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 12:32 pm:
Omg, this is so powerful ! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 1:00 pm :
Wow! Thanks so much!!!
 
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backgroundwriter07 said...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 10:49 am:
I absolutly love this poem. You did a great job with the word selection. keep it up. =)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 12:59 pm :
Thank you! The word selection actually gave me a lot of trouble when I was writing it, because I wanted it to rhyme. Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it!
 
kaylasouthw replied...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 8:12 pm :
lovelovelove
 
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illosionist said...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 9:43 am:
very very well done..i do like it from start to finish..the eyes are a hard image to capture, and in just a snapshot everything can change them...great job capturing them in the moments.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 12:58 pm :
Thanks so much! It really means a lot, as I really was trying to capture what the eyes can hold!
 
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sportsycrystal said...
Jun. 19, 2011 at 8:35 am:
I have to say that at first I wasn't impressed...but when I came to the ending, the impact hit me. This is really, really good and,because the idea is simple, it is that much more easier to relate to. Great job on this
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 19, 2011 at 9:37 am :

Thanks so much! [Thanks for finishing  it too, I know a lot of people who will read the beginning, not like it, and not finish it all the way through].

 

Thanks so much!

 
sportsycrystal replied...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 3:17 pm :
well really its np its their loss in the end  : )
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 4:03 pm :
Wow, thanks so much! It means a lot!
 
sportsycrystal replied...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 1:31 pm :
yah its really no problem... u can check out my songs n stuff if u want
 
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MendTheBrokenx3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 1:34 pm:
I Can Relate To This Entirely. I Have Been Through A Lot In My Life, Including This. Great Job && Keep Up The Good Work..! :D
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 2:48 pm :

Thanks so much!!!

 

 
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