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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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spoon-spoon said...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 10:49 am:
that is the same way i felt for someone and i think it did come from your heart
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 2:49 pm :
Thanks so much! And, when I wrote it, it definitely did..... :)
 
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RanaHewezi1998 said...
Jun. 10, 2011 at 7:46 pm:
wow tat's amazing :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 8:36 am :
Thanks so much!
 
RanaHewezi1998 replied...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 1:47 pm :
ur welcome n i can actually relate 2 dis!!!!!!!!!!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 12, 2011 at 1:53 pm :
Thanks! That really means a lot to me! I love it when people can relate to my work!
 
RanaHewezi1998 replied...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 9:12 pm :
haha ur welcome!
 
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starstruk87b said...
Jun. 4, 2011 at 7:56 pm:
that i love you.. but i dont love you.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 6:37 pm :

Sorry?

 

Are you referencing my other poem?

 

Thanks for the comment.....

 
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can_you_keep_a_secretThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 29, 2011 at 11:38 am:

Oh my santa.

I love this . I have the same situation. Almost as if you look at someone and you see that , that one person is a symbol of all the feelings you've ever felt from them and they just keep coming up. <3 Five stars lovee.

 
Lonleydandy replied...
May 29, 2011 at 8:25 pm :
Wow, thank you soooo much!
 
can_you_keep_a_secretThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 1:31 pm :

Pahaha. you're soo welcome!!

 

 
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anniehall said...
May 29, 2011 at 9:37 am:

I love this and I feel I can really relate to it :) great job!

what is the 100 themes challange you mentioned? I'd like to try it :)

 
Lonleydandy replied...
May 29, 2011 at 8:24 pm :

Thank you very much!

As for the 100 themes challenge, the goal is to take all 100 themes [that I will list out after I tell you what it is] and use them to inspire you in a piece of writing or a picture or anything like that. If you use all of them [each one recieves there own thing, so one picture can't stand for love and challenges, or something like that, it has to be one or the other], then you have completed it. You don't actually get anything but the satisfaction for completing i... (more »)

 
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MendTheBrokenx3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 23, 2011 at 11:23 am:

Great Job. c:

You Had A Good Word Choice And Amazing Emotion. :D
Keep Up The Good Work.!

 
Lonleydandy replied...
May 23, 2011 at 9:22 pm :
Thanks!!!!!
 
MendTheBrokenx3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 2:04 pm :
You're Oh So Very Welcome. :D
 
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ohcaptainmycaptain said...
May 20, 2011 at 12:30 pm:
Amazing job! It sounds like there is a lot behind it. Very relatable too
 
Lonleydandy replied...
May 20, 2011 at 5:31 pm :
Wow, thank you so much! I love to relate to my readers!
 
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AdalleyVictoria101 said...
May 16, 2011 at 9:18 pm:
I think I am in love with this poem <3
 
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