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I look into your eyes
And what do I see
Everything in the world
Except me

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
Who is your special girl

I look into your eyes
And I see your soul
It’s a power too big
For even me to control

I look into your eyes
And I can see that look
On your face
That I unknowingly took

I look into your eyes
And I can see secrets
That you’ve hidden from me
And have willingly kept

I look into your eyes
And I can see the lies
That you poured down my throat
And that you showed to my eyes

I look into your eyes
And I see a smile
It’s that lovely thing
I haven’t seen in a while

I look into your eyes
And I see your heart
I tried to take it
Instead it pulled me apart

I look into your eyes
And I see the love
I just wanna ask
For some help from above

I look into your eyes
And I see your feelings
I know them all the time
And I can see that I’m stealing

I look into your eyes
I can see you entirely
I love every bit of it
You are so lively

You look into my eyes
And you see a girl
Who is afraid
To let you in her world

You look into my eyes
And you see my heart
It is still broken
From where your tore it apart

You look into my eyes
And you see my soul
It has been scarred
Because of your parole


You look in to my eyes
And you see the secrets
That you kept from me

You wonder how I got them
You wonder
Who gave me the key

Then you look into my eyes
And see the secrets
I’m hiding from you

They are written clearly
In black
And in blue

They all point in one direction
And that’s why I’m blue
They all point to the fact


That I love you




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Aspiringauhor said...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 9:39 am:
This was amazing. There is simply no other word to describe it. Is this supposed to be a song or a poem? :)
 
Aspiringauhor replied...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 11:42 am :
OK. Wow. I'll be waiting for FOREVER! Agh, I am not a patient person. I guess I'll just have to be! :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 11:46 am :
Neither am I, but we all have to be at times.
 
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sofii said...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 9:29 pm:
Wow that was an amazing poem!(:
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 11:25 am :
Thank you!
 
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pumpkinsker said...
Jan. 7, 2011 at 8:25 pm:
This is an AMAZING poem!! i LOVE it! I just had a recent break up with my bf so i know how it is to be lonely! Also the guy that i really like is datin my best friend which is hard for me but im workin on it! Keep up the great work! :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 7:29 am :
Thanks sooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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purple_ashes said...
Dec. 25, 2010 at 5:07 pm:
This is really great and I loved it great work!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Dec. 26, 2010 at 11:34 am :
Thank you so much!
 
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shy-writer said...
Dec. 23, 2010 at 8:27 pm:
Awesome Song! Ur a great writer! Keep writing! <3 it! :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Dec. 24, 2010 at 7:54 am :
Thanks! I'll keep trying, don't worry!
 
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Emma6 said...
Dec. 19, 2010 at 9:34 pm:
this is such a good song! i love how you made it easy for me to find a tune to stick to and just sing along. keep writing. your doing a wonderful job!:D
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Dec. 20, 2010 at 10:00 am :

Hahaha, thank you!!! I'm glad that you found a tune to go with it...the one that I originally wrote it to was VERYYYYYYYYYYYY repetative..hahahaha.

Thanks again!

 
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justsmileanddance said...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 6:07 pm:
i love this!! perfectly written!!! :)
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 8:18 pm :
Thanks!!!!!
 
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Angiethoughts said...
Dec. 4, 2010 at 4:44 pm:
I honestly love this and  can relate so much.
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Dec. 5, 2010 at 3:19 pm :
Thanks! I love it when people can relate to my work!
 
marissa159ilovetexas replied...
Dec. 5, 2010 at 11:10 pm :
very poetic and honest ... i can picture two people sitting across from each other after well lets say an argument... after an argument just staring at each other and seeing the truth
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Dec. 6, 2010 at 6:42 am :
Wow, I never looked at it that way! Thanks :D
 
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tinkatink said...
Dec. 2, 2010 at 4:14 pm:
awww that was beautiful! i loved it!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Dec. 5, 2010 at 3:17 pm :
Thanks so much!!!!
 
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