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You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

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Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!

© John O., New City, NY

The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!
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SWRA said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 8:25 am
IT Was a really good song but next time just use a little bit more rhyming words
liljrp said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:20 am
That was pretty good you showed a lot of feelings on having a person be yours (:. Did you just do this writing when you were sad or what?
ZeldaLarping SILVER said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:58 am
ZeldaLarping SILVER, Campbellton, Florida
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I love it,its so....cant explain it.
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 8:28 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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awww :)) that was really sweet, i completely loved it!!! nice job ^^ that was so beautiful
distant_dreamer GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 6:25 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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Thank you so much!!! :) You will soon, no worries.. Lol :)
Sammie_Shamrock PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 10:40 pm
Sammie_Shamrock PLATINUM, Holland, Michigan
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Awesome Song Dudette!!! im a song writer as well, and you have awesome potential! Keep it up!!! Love to hear more from you!
distant_dreamer GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 3:02 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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well, like it or not, I don't really care, to me I think it rocks, and I don't care who thinks otherwise! I appreciate your comment though...
everthought BRONZE said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 2:46 pm
everthought BRONZE, Vancouver, Other
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Oh my, this song is extremely typical. nothing new!
LoveSickenedRebel GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 7:17 am
LoveSickenedRebel GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
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cool song. i really like this one.
emmilove24 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 3 2010 at 9:41 pm
emmilove24 BRONZE, Erlanger, Kentucky
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this song blew me away. honestly it did.  it inspired me.  I really love it <3
jcampgirl PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 3:42 pm
jcampgirl PLATINUM, New Caney, Texas
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wow you need to get this published some wasres or at lest coopy right it some how varry good love it !
JocelynnTaylor GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2010 at 9:59 am
JocelynnTaylor GOLD, Templeton, Pennsylvania
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I love it I sang it outloud and it sounded like I could never believe.  And this is just the FIRST ONE!!!  You have a lot of potential so keep it up!! ^_^
dreamer9492 GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2010 at 1:29 am
dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
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could you please comment my song "Perfect guy" or rate please and thanks =) it would help A LOT
dreamer9492 GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2010 at 1:28 am
dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
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good job!! i loved it =) keep it up!
carebare96 said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 9:52 pm
This is amazing. I write songs too and this is one of those kind of songs where I wish that I wrote it. This is so good
1COR13 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 8 2010 at 3:46 am
1COR13 PLATINUM, Anchor Point, Alaska
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I LIKE IT!
distant_dreamer GOLD said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 4:16 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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&quot;Life&#039;s a climb, but the view is great!&quot;

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thanks!!! Really what song is it and who is it by???? Thanks again!!!
lilyxoxo GOLD said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 3:20 pm
lilyxoxo GOLD, Springfeild, Massachusetts
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love last forever as long as you dont lie or try to hide

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i love it but just top warn you the frist 3 lines are also in a church song with the same name but all the rest pure gold
distant_dreamer GOLD said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 2:55 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a climb, but the view is great!&quot;

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Hey! I'm so glad you like it! Yes, I'd loved to take a look at your work kjoiner11, and LifeintheBand, Do you think you could put a recording of it on youtube so I could just see it, and yes you have my permission as long as you give me credit for writing the song, and not to take credit for it! :) Thanks again!!!!! :)
LifeInTheBand said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 2:13 pm
  This is such a great song!  Me and my band were looking at it and wrote some notes for it.  With your premission I was wondering if we would be aloud to use this in one of our preformances?