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You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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gustavo said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 7:43 am
awesome song 10/10

on Jan. 8 2010 at 9:02 am
CylasPalacios GOLD, Macomb, Illinois
12 articles 6 photos 11 comments
This is amazing! Is it like a love song?

It is almost "Emo", but in the end it totally brings you up again.

I love the mixed emotions.

on Jan. 7 2010 at 2:31 pm
JessicaBby SILVER, Orange, California
6 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
never judge a book by its cover :)

:) i love itt

on Jan. 3 2010 at 7:25 pm
I wanted to find a site to share my lyrics and poems and view others too, perfect!

on Jan. 2 2010 at 3:02 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

It's contemporary Christian Gospel. :) O.K, thanks!!!!

walter said...
on Jan. 2 2010 at 1:28 pm
walter, Poteet, Texas
0 articles 6 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Whatever happens, happens. Whatever, in happening, causes something else to happen, causes something else to happen. Whatever in happening, causes itself to happen again, happens again. It doesn't always happen in chronological order though."

I'll c what I can do. XD what kinda song is it? rock, pop, country, etc.

Conchkid97 said...
on Jan. 1 2010 at 3:54 pm
that was an awsome song whoever makes music to it send it to me!

on Dec. 31 2009 at 10:20 am
xEmmiiix BRONZE, East Meadow, New York
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments
Thank you so much. I will make sure people know that you wrote that song. Thanks!!!

on Dec. 31 2009 at 8:54 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Not really. But hey, if you want to put music to it, be my guest! Lol :) Thanks for the comment! Btw, happy new years!!

walter said...
on Dec. 31 2009 at 1:21 am
walter, Poteet, Texas
0 articles 6 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Whatever happens, happens. Whatever, in happening, causes something else to happen, causes something else to happen. Whatever in happening, causes itself to happen again, happens again. It doesn't always happen in chronological order though."

wow, that was really good. do u have music 2 go with it?

on Dec. 30 2009 at 7:00 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Yes, sure!!! :) Thanks again!!

on Dec. 30 2009 at 10:17 am
xEmmiiix BRONZE, East Meadow, New York
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments
I do alot of writing. I use music in my books alot. I really like your song and I was hoping you would allow me to use this song in my book.

400king BRONZE said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 10:57 am
400king BRONZE, Hemet, California
1 article 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
a poem is never finished, just abandoned

some lines are too long compared to other lines so the flow doesn't really work. if you were gonna do like short/ long then you would have to continue that pattern or make one long line into like two seperate ones.

on Dec. 28 2009 at 3:36 pm
Tat ws realy good I write my self i have a whole of poems ive written bt they gt missed placed btkeep it up the good work u gt talent

on Dec. 24 2009 at 4:05 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much!!!! :) Merry Christmas!

on Dec. 24 2009 at 2:42 pm
xEmmiiix BRONZE, East Meadow, New York
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments
I really like it

on Dec. 23 2009 at 1:11 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you all soooooo MUCH for your sweet comments! :) I'll try to check out all of your work! :) Happy Holidays!

on Dec. 23 2009 at 11:48 am
lovebugg1993 BRONZE, Bdffalo, New York
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have a nice voice wen it comes to singing.....................ima freak

im a producer myself and i like it

on Dec. 22 2009 at 8:31 pm
montana PLATINUM, Parker, Colorado
41 articles 2 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
cliche quotes I have are.....<br /> I know, right? and..... Are you kidding me?

This is your first song? I hope u write more. Do u think u can comment on my work thx.

on Dec. 22 2009 at 8:40 am
eagle_gurl62 BRONZE, Chambersburg, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
doesn&#039;t matter how hard you run. you can never fun away from your problems.

i liked it a lot i feel when i read this i could reallly trust you would be there