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You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 4:45 pm
:D I like it :D

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:44 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Okay, that's fine, I'll be waiting!!! Lol :)

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:43 pm
Alexzaderea2013 BRONZE, Cottage Grove, Minnesota
1 article 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Character is not how you act around people, but how you act when you're alone.

Okay, thanks. I just added it today, so it's pending at the moment. Soo, it might be a bit before you get to see it.

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:42 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Well, don't you worry, I enjoy reading long comments! :D Btw, I'll be sure to check, rate and comment your work, which I bet is Amazing!! :)

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:38 pm
Alexzaderea2013 BRONZE, Cottage Grove, Minnesota
1 article 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Character is not how you act around people, but how you act when you're alone.

People have complained that my comments are too long. I find it rather petty of them to complain about something so simple, but to each his own, I guess.

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:33 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

What do you mean, had people complain about what? Thanks! :}

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:31 pm
Alexzaderea2013 BRONZE, Cottage Grove, Minnesota
1 article 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Character is not how you act around people, but how you act when you're alone.

No problem. And I apologized because in the past I've had people complain. <.< my bad...lol. And happy Thanksgiving to you, too! ^.^

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:28 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a climb, but the view is great!&quot;

Thanks so much for the advice! ;) I love classical music!!! ;) Oh, don't be sorry, I like long comments! Haha Lol :) Btw, HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:25 pm
Alexzaderea2013 BRONZE, Cottage Grove, Minnesota
1 article 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Character is not how you act around people, but how you act when you&#039;re alone.

Clavinovas are fun because you can play with the sound. I'm more of a classical person, so I'd probably do a grand piano because it has a more natural sound. But it completely depends on what kind of a sound you'd like for the song. Some sounds on the clavinova also aren't very accurate, but are still very interesting. Like the guitar for example. Once you really learn how to play it you can do so much more with it than strum. lol. If you can play more than one instrument, or have some friends that play different instruments, you should ask for their imput on the music and instruments. Multiple minds are better than one since you get other views and opinions. (I apologize, this was a very long comment >.< lol)

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:21 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a climb, but the view is great!&quot;

Probally a clavinova, I can automatically put all kinds of instrument sounds with it! Do you have an Idea?

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:18 pm
Alexzaderea2013 BRONZE, Cottage Grove, Minnesota
1 article 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Character is not how you act around people, but how you act when you&#039;re alone.

No problem. :)

What instruments do you plan on using for it?

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:13 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a climb, but the view is great!&quot;

I'm still working on that! Thanks so much!!! I'm so glad you like it!!!

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:12 pm
Alexzaderea2013 BRONZE, Cottage Grove, Minnesota
1 article 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Character is not how you act around people, but how you act when you&#039;re alone.

I love it! ^.^ Did you come up with accual music for this? If so, I think you should record it and post it. :D

on Nov. 19 2009 at 6:27 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a climb, but the view is great!&quot;

I'm so excited because tomorrow is a hlaf day at school, and then we have a whole week off!!! :) Are you planning to do anything for Thankgiving?? :)

Nt111193 said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 6:04 pm
Thanx you too

on Nov. 19 2009 at 6:02 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a climb, but the view is great!&quot;

Nice to meet you Ami! :) Btw, HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!

Nt111193 said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 6:01 pm
I go by Ami

on Nov. 19 2009 at 5:58 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a climb, but the view is great!&quot;

Really, that's so awesome!! Btw, my name is Monica! :)

Nt111193 said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 5:56 pm
I've been playin guitar since I was like 7 and the bass guitar for about a year

on Nov. 19 2009 at 5:53 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a climb, but the view is great!&quot;

I've always wanted to learn how to play both those instruments, but they seem hard to learn! How many years have you been playing???