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I just wanna know
Boy
What do you want

I just wanna learn
Kid
What do you need

I just wanna love
You
But you don’t love back

So I just wanna know
Are you challenging me?

Do you hate me
As much as I love you?

Or is it all a hoax
To pull me
Further into
A trap?

Do you want
What I want?

Or do you play with
My heart
And my mind?

Do you need
What I need?

Or do you threaten
My health
And soul?

I just wanna know
What you want
What you need
What you see

I just wanna know
What you think
What you believe
What you try to show

Yah
You just gotta
Speak up
So I can speak
Out to you

Yah
I know
How I feel
And I think of
How you feel
And I know
What I think
But I can never know
What you think
Of me

So I gotta ask…
Are you challenging me?




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Snow_White said...
May 31, 2010 at 8:10 pm:
Hey i think it was good...i mean it could be a lil worked on around here and there but still it was good :)
 
LonleydandyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 31, 2010 at 8:12 pm :
Haha, trust me, it needs A LOT of work!!!! Thanks for the comment though! I enjoy constructive criticism :D
 
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LonleydandyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 8:21 pm:
I really do apoligize for this one...I definitally know it isn't my best work by any means. I like my next two better. They are called "B's always belong together" and "Flowers on My Gravestone" both of which are a lot a lot a lot better than this one...I really don't know where I was going with this. Sorry!!!!
 
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Dec. 30, 2010 at 10:02 am :
You don't apologize for your work, it's just not right. Trust me, I've written much worse than this one. It's not so bad really. Just not your best, and if you've done better, then this one is just a dent in something that you have that gets dents...
 
LonleydandyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 30, 2010 at 5:04 pm :
Hahaha, Thanks! I've never really thought of it that way!!!!!
 
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