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October 12, 2009
By ohmy_chelsie SILVER, Lawrenceburg, Indiana
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No one was watching and no one was praying
but what does it matter anyway
and everyone could see as she stepped out of the car
that she hit just a little too too hard

the girls in the back were crying out they're dying
their bodies meshed with the car
you could tell they were hit just a little too too hard

so many dying
so many crying
no one was watching
no one was praying
but what does it matter anyway

I remember the day like it was yesterday
I can hear the squeal of the tires
and the ghost of the screams
the crying out loud
the bust of the seams
they all went flying flying
so high on life but they were dying dying

so many dying
so many crying
no one was watching
no one was praying
but what does it matter anyway

and everyone could see as she stepped out of the car
that she hit just a little too too hard
but what does it matter anyway

the rain poured down
as the night crept in
they closed their eyes for the final time
making a wish and holding each other tight
but what does it matter anyway

so many dying
so many crying
no one was watching
no one was praying
but what does it matter anyway

The author's comments:
May 9 2008 I lost a very dear friend in a car accident. We were childhood best friend and then we started to grow apart but just before she died we started getting close again. I remember the last day she was alive. She smiled at me. and screamed HEY CHELSIES BACK. And then on that rainy foggy night She and another girl died in the car accident. The driver walked away with her life but is she really living anymore?
any way yeah this piece is important to me.
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JordanJordanJordan GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 9:32 pm
JordanJordanJordan GOLD, Churchville, Virginia
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I am really sorry for you, death is hard. As I was reading this I was singing it in my head. Very good for a song and I got a melody to it and everything. I will have to pull out the old six string and play it to my melody. GOOD JOB.
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 3:12 pm
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I don't agree, if this is her way of getting out the sadness and pain of losing someone she loved then to me, that's great. I also really liked this and it's very moving.
bmmseh said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 9:30 am
This is a very sad song!!! I'm really sorry about your friend that died.
BMMSkf said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 8:11 am
this poem makes me sad. :( But its still a good one.............. <3 it
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I like this alot. Im very sorry about your friend. this song is great.
Mysteriousmystii BRONZE said...
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This is really good! :)
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on Dec. 26 2009 at 11:22 am
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This was incredble. So beautiful and touching, I couldn't stop reading. The simplistic repetition was perfect, because anyone could imagine. I'm sorry for your loss.
Lyndsayyy said...
on Dec. 4 2009 at 2:17 pm
Great Job! I like how every so often there was a rhym sceme.. Keep it up! :)
tj12321 said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 1:08 pm
Great job, very very very very very very very good job. I am so sorry to hear about your friend, Just remeber that life goes on. I am sure that she is happy where she is. Keep up the great work. Your Doing great!:0
tj12321 said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 1:03 pm
Great job. I am so sorry to hear about your friend, but just remeber, life goes on, and shes happy where she is. Keep writing, your great
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Oh, I'm so sorry! Really, though, this piece was great. If writing is what you love, then keep doing it because im sure that's what she would have wanted. (:(
HeavenCooley GOLD said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 11:38 am
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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very good job!!

just know you need to be happy thats what she

would of wanted!!

keep writing though!!(:
Kendra92 SILVER said...
on Oct. 19 2009 at 3:55 pm
Kendra92 SILVER, The Colony, Texas
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I'm so sorry. It's terrible that you would have to go through something like that. Keep writing. You use your inspiration so very well. This is amazing :]
dylonmichael GOLD said...
on Oct. 19 2009 at 11:05 am
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omg im sorry for your loss like march this year i lost my friend in a car accident but the only difference is she wasnt hit she swerved off the road and into a culvert and the water pushed her car into the thing and she got trapped and couldnt get out in the end she drowned
seapenguin said...
on Oct. 19 2009 at 3:01 am
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Oh, my God. I am so sorry for your lost. Death isn't easy. These lyrics are really good. Good job, kiddo. :)
anotherromanctic PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 18 2009 at 6:48 pm
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it almost seems as if you're apathetic about living after your friend. you should live things more for your late friend. sorry if this offends. great piece.
singingchic15 SILVER said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 9:47 am
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I'm really sorry about your friend but, this piece that you wrote was very moving and I loved it. Keep writing!
ThereIsAlwaysHope GOLD said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 4:51 am
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i'm sorry to hear about your friend.

but yes, this is very well written :)