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Unknown End

May 31, 2011
By Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..


No one in this world knows his end
Going like blind on a strange road
Expects his destiny to blow a sudden explode
Optimism at its very best
Induced in every innocent heart
Fooling them from their very start
But I think the world goes by the same trend
Landing many people with their unknown end
I am running behind answers that I never got
I m trying to solve this destiny’s plot
I may end up winning or may be not
But I m trying too hard to make my destiny my friend
As it’s about my unknown end

Its all in your mind too you see

i loved the way i used to be
when i cried with happiness full of glee
those were my childhood day and nights
an age where i used to roam in the streets, left and rights
looked and thought clearly
my mind so clean and fear free
but the time is changing furiously
and i m thinking curiously
I am the one whose identity is changed keeping the name same.
from what i was in the childhood to now what i became
The attitude is changed with world’s game
burning in this question’s flame……

I am running behind answers that I never got
I m trying to solve this destiny’s plot
I may end up winning or may be not
But I m trying too hard to defend
As it’s about my unknown end

i m thinking curiously
the people are same but soul has changed
over the years their goal has changed
they laugh at thoughts they used to keep
the aims which were unfulfilled
the dreams , all they collected in a heap
but inside .......... you know... they weep
they cry for what's not under their control
so they keep adjusting and reinventing their goals
flowing with the flow
bowing their heads down to
destinies written above.

My past stings
so hope only lies in what our future brings
wounds are becoming deeper as the time passes by
I have to catch my hopes before my chances vanish and fly.

and I m thinking curiously……..
I wonder what my future gonna be
The Question has many answers
Depends which one you wanna choose
But to choose u got to have the guts and moves
Would I be able to develop that strength I need
To see my future become a tree from a seed
I can’t see my dreams flow out from my veins
I can,t see them bleed
Its about dreams
and it seems
too hard to ,make them come true
still I think their I a hope
an still there are tensions to cope
and I m thinking curiously………..
I just wanna be the one whose screams are meant to be heard
and dreams come true word by word

I am running behind answers that I never got
I m trying to solve this destiny’s plot
I may end up winning or may be not
But I m trying too hard to defend
As it’s about my unknown end..................
......... ...........


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on Feb. 6 2012 at 9:22 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\&quot;<br /> ~Robert Frost<br /> <br /> \&quot;Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\&quot;<br /> ~Edgar Allan Poe

I will be on cbox for the rest of the week (after school of course, haha) anyways ive been looking for u everywhere! Be on sometime too!

Shivam GOLD said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 8:58 pm
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

OMG.......... where hv u been angel.. ,looking forward for a healthy chat...be back soon in the cbox

on Feb. 6 2012 at 9:33 am
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\&quot;<br /> ~Robert Frost<br /> <br /> \&quot;Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\&quot;<br /> ~Edgar Allan Poe

Its me, Angelgirl... haha, we have talked before. Anyways, you are very welcome for reading it for my class. My computer wont let me log in, so Im on my nook right now.

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 7:16 am
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Loved it!! I can definitely relate to. You are an amazing poet. Please keep writing!

Shivam GOLD said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 3:34 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

I can not express my thanks in word for what you've given me by reciting this poem in the class..I never thought that this poem will be loved this much... I thank you from the bottom of my heart for loving this poem and making others listen this... I also would want to know that are you a member of teenink..or do i know you..coz in ur comment ,it seemed that we've talked before...hope u reply... -)

G. said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 6:22 pm
I loved this poem so much B. I read it for my oral interpratation time where we read something for the class and everyone loved, especially me. You are a fantastic writer, and your work has a lot of soul and heart to it. Not to mention you are one of the few guys I know that actually likes writing poetry.

Shivam GOLD said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 2:24 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

thanks a lot..... its gr8 to see that u can relate to this poem....that means a lot to me...thanx again..

on Jan. 25 2012 at 1:43 am
SamanthaFaulkner GOLD, Romulus, Michigan
16 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love to faults is always blind, always is to joy inclined. Lawless, winged, and unconfined, and breaks all chains from every mind.&quot;

I quite enjoyed reading this for the soul fact that I'm caught exactly where this poem is, not knowing the end or even how to get there. I love the line "I just wanna be the one whose screams are meant to be heard and dreams come true word by word." I can truly relate to that line. Great job!

Shivam GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 5:07 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

thanks for your appreciating words.... i do not deserve the respect you gave me by calling me a 'Poet'. I'm very grateful for that.. thanx...

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 12:14 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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I really like this questionable poem, "No one in this world knows his end" Every line made me want to read more, and wow you're a great poet !

butterfly123 said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 3:28 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! amazing piece. i really love the way it flows and also its depth. 5/5 from me. good job!

Shivam GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 3:33 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

Thanks :-)

on Jul. 6 2011 at 3:30 am
SaintJamesHallow PLATINUM, Sequim, Washington
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Great start, great poem, I think you'll go far. Never stop writing and never restrict yourself. Let it all flow :)

on Jul. 5 2011 at 11:22 pm
TanazMasaba GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 10 photos 214 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You&#039;ve gotta dance like there&#039;s nobody watching,<br /> Love like you&#039;ll never be hurt,<br /> Sing like there&#039;s nobody listening,<br /> And live like it&#039;s Heaven on Earth.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ---William W. Purkey

hey this is so good! great job there! Do you mind reading my poem Winter Nights? It's right before your one