I loved the way you tickled my feet and read to me till' I fell asleep. You kissed my head and made my bed and made sure I was all ways well fed. You gave me advice, made sure I was nice and when I was wrong you made me think twice. You all ways would try and you never did lie but some way some how I never did say goodbye.
thetruthawaits94
this has great feeling in it! I think you did a wonderful job! :) may i ask, why do you format all of your poems in this way (like in a paragraph)?
JerseyGirl716I can feel your pain in your words; great job!
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