Miss Me But Let Me Go

The rhyme scheme is a little too simplistic for my taste, but it does organize itself very well and hold the piece together nicely within its outlines. I like the topic and thought you sought to explain an abstract concept very well. I wouldn't have minded another few lines to finish it off though. I feel as if it's a bit unfinished. I want to leave this on a positive note though, so: fantastic as always. I love your work. :)