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I didn't see it was love,
Even though it was so plain,
And I was wondering all the time,
"Why do I think of you again and again?"

I didn't know the feeling,
That I was having for you,
Was more than just friendship,
Maybe something more true...

I was so dumb,
I was a fool,
Cos' I never knew,
That it was love,

Now when you're gone,
I've come to know,
What I never knew,
That it was love.

I used to think love is just a fairytale,
It ain't nothing real,
And now I'm falling hard for you,
Can't you feel what I feel?

Now you're with some other girl,
Not even knowing what did you do,
You left me heartbroken,
Waiting here for you...

I was so dumb,
I was a fool,
Cos' I never knew,
That it was love,

Now when you're gone,
I've come to know,
What I never knew,
That it was love.

Dream is the only place where you're mine,
I see you standing right by my side,
And you're holding me so tight,
It feels so good,
It feels so right,

I don't want it to be dream,
I wanna make it real,
I just wanna make it real,
Can't it be real???

I was so dumb,
I was a fool
Cos' I never knew,
That it was love,

Now when you're gone,
I've come to know,
What I never knew,
That it was love.




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InsaneRobThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 8 at 11:11 am:
Out of all ur works this one took my heart away, u r a real core of talent!!!!! Well Done Zoya....i really love ur work!
 
Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 5:12 am :
Thnx :) :) :)
 
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_Kiran_This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 26 at 7:40 am:
sweeet poem yrr! but it is sad: ( that girl is too late: p
 
Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 26 at 12:49 pm :
Thanks :) :) :)
 
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HamzawaseemThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 14 at 12:45 pm:
simple yet realistic. nice work!
 
Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 14 at 12:49 pm :
Thanks :) :) :)
 
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so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 13 at 10:06 am:
Amazing poem! I love it! You're so talented! Please return the favor and look at my work :) Thanks
 
Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 14 at 12:23 pm :
I'm glad u liked it :) :) :)
 
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FizzaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 7 at 10:49 am:
nice poem. :)
 
Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 8 at 4:59 am :
Thank u so much :) :) :)
 
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loveshersheysThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 6 at 10:56 am:
Good job Zoya! It's a beautifully written poem. I really like it =)
 
Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 6 at 10:58 am :
Thnx... Love ya girlie :) :) :)
 
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MonsterGirl2000This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 4 at 11:32 am:
well written Zoya_Khan I feel you in this poem
 
Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 4 at 12:07 pm :
Thank u :) :) :)
 
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ZacharyCrankThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 26, 2012 at 12:18 pm:
You could have had some stronger diction in some places but otherwise it was really well written.
 
Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 27, 2012 at 2:48 am :
I'm glad u liked it... Thank u so much 4 ur comment :) :) :)
 
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Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 22, 2012 at 10:30 am:
Thank you so much for your comments and support. Love y'all :) :) :)
 
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evawinchester247This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 21, 2012 at 9:04 am:
this poem is partly about me too....
 
Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 22, 2012 at 9:46 am :
Awww... That's so sad :'( BTW It's just a fictional poem...!!!
 
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InsaneRobThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 16, 2012 at 10:51 am:
v nice and sweet lines! 
 
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