High school

noooooo this isn't a sonnet.  sonnets are 14 lines with 10 syllables in each line in blank verse form (as in every other syllable is emphasized).  their rhyming scheme is ABABCDCDEFEFGG.  this fulfulls literally none of those requirements aaah

This was so insightful. You're a fantastic writer. If you don't mind, I'd love to hear your opinion of my poem Broken Structure. Cheers. :)

I like it, though I am pretty sure you mean "losing" instead of loosing...

Very well written but not the format of a Sonnet ;)

 

A Sonnets Format is:

ABAB

CDCD

EFEF

GG

 

A total of 14 lines. 4 versus. No more now less :)

great poem hits highschool on the spot. keep it up.

I like the structure. The rhyme scheme gives a sing-song quality to the poem which goes with the mocking some kids recieve in high school. The end is abrupt and a little shakey but over all great poem. Not sure its true sonnet format though.

I'm only in 8th grade and now I'm kinda scared to go to high school :(

p.s. the poem was well written keep writing more :)

so true.. middle school all over, we're just a bit older:P

Highschool blows.

Its cool but this isnt a sonnet. The first two verses are supposed to have four lines. The other two are only to have only three lines, to have a total of fourteen lines in total. And its supposed to have ten syllables per line, because sonnets are of major art. The poem is great and all but, it isnt a sonnet. Probably free verse though.

Cute...but it isn't a sonnet. Sonnets have fourteen lines, ten syllables per line, and are commonly written in iambic pentameter. This certainly is in the wrong section.

The words "losing" and "loser" only have one "o"... Sorry to be a bit of a stick in the mud about thing. Still, pretty good.

I absolutely loved this. It's so true and well written. Great job

Oh my goodness I loved it. The entire thing sounds so much like high school really is!

5/5

this was really good! i love the second stanza :)

 like this, i want to see more from you keep it up.

I really like this! It is so true. When you said high school is a game, I was like "whoa, they have a point"

i loved this great imagery! please check out my poems "forgotten domain" and "cumulus prison" and comment/rate! im dying for some helpful insightt!

i feel tha same..smh! but gud work. its a gud thing ur able to write wat u feel n not walk dwn the path of destruction bcuz of rude ppl. GUD WORK!