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Take my Heart and Break It
October 11, 2009
Take my broken heart,
and rip it from my chest.
Steal away my soul,
and finally put me to rest.
I dreamt about you day and night,
and I wanted you to be mine.
You watched me in my hardest days,
and sometimes you watched me shine.
Every time I saw you,
my heart would skip a beat.
Every time you said my name,
I would spring out of my seat.
I loved you with my heart and soul.
I loved you year after year.
But something always kept us apart:
our confusion, our chances, our fear.
But now there is no hope for us,
we are doomed to be apart.
Maybe I won't feel the pain
if you completely break my heart.
© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA
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This article has 226 comments.
taintedannex GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 4:20 am
Wow, this is so fantastic.
I love it to bits :) You've captured the emotions so perfectly and expressed them exactly as they feel. Take everything you said about my poem and double it for yours ;)
I love it to bits :) You've captured the emotions so perfectly and expressed them exactly as they feel. Take everything you said about my poem and double it for yours ;)
VampiericRain GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 4:04 pm
Isn't that the truth. I'm having a problem like this and it sucks.
Lonleydandy said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 7:33 am
Love it love it love it
calephchad BRONZE said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 2:45 pm
This poem is so true to life. Thanks for posting this. Very well written. This is a definite 5 out of 5. If you'd like, stop by and check out some of my work.
DustyCheyanne<3 SILVER said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 7:52 pm
This is sad, but amazing (:
Beautiful.
And its something i can definatley relate to. Great job!
Beautiful.
And its something i can definatley relate to. Great job!
Ridelova101 said...
on Dec. 19 2009 at 3:39 pm
I know exactly how you feel. I loved the poem.
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2009 at 9:34 pm
i want to thank everyone who has commented on this poem so far :) this poem explains everything i went through, and i think every girl experiences this at least once :) thanks so much for all of your support! you're amazing :)
<3 dreamer
<3 dreamer
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 28 2009 at 11:41 am
i love this poem so much. it's just so amazing.
sarahxinsane921 SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2009 at 10:34 am
I love this poem. it is soo well written. keep writing!
WeetzieBat PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 7:27 pm
This is a very well written poem! I loved reading this. In my opinion it showed how some relationships go. From the beginning sweetness, to the ending breakup. Keep up the good work!!
