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you cry for me hoping
that one day i will
see me the way you
see me praying to
god praying to him that
i see me the way
you see me you hope
that i walk with my
head held high
you hope that i
don't let people's
words get the best
of me you hope
that i don't let people
tear me down but
guess what? you
can keep on hoping
'cause that won't be
happening anytime
soon so you do that
keep on hoping and
praying but it's
just a waste of time

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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pianokeysevie said...
May 25, 2012 at 11:20 am:
it was hard to read since there's no punctuation, but still a good poem.. keep up the good work:)
 
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adampraveenrockandroll.s.v.pThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 7, 2011 at 12:05 am:
WITH MY WHOLE HEART I'M TELLING.........EXCELLENT DUDE
 
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annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 20, 2010 at 3:22 am:

I love the way you cut each line and structured the poem.

Good job! :)

 
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LifesbutadreamThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 6:40 pm:
This was very pretty Good Job :)
 
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Michelle24 said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 1:21 am:
That was really beautiful. And I can understand completely.
 
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