In the quietness of the cold, still night, the beast that is Guardian to many, As it prowls to it's same to sing ab-right. Shaking an ebony mane, pleasing any. The audience that a'shines through darkness, the sense of chill and pleasure floats around. As the cries of the beast rejects greiveness. Twelve times does this event occur on ground and as the rest of the choir arrived, Then the musical of the plain began. Critters came to see the a'dancing flame, That emanated around the orb's span. Haunting the sound may be to various To one a melody that's glorious.
Glorious Melody of the Beast
Nice! i like your word usage and the way you organized the words in your sentences.... please check out my work........ thanks!!
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Really good work. I wish people still wrote like "a'shines". It's lost with the young crowd. Nice job
Excellent work! I'm sorry, but I don't really know about proper sonnet format, so I can't give you a full critique. As far as I can see, this is perfect! Keep writing!
AMAZING!!!



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