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Vista of Moonlit Night

January 3, 2013
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

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After every interval of a fortnight,
The queen of night comes to address,
To preach love and cascade light,
The mysterious charisma; the white dress!

As the moonlight embraces everything,
The stars blush and put on veils.
Silently, the lake keeps on smiling,
With breeze, the perfume of night sails.

The nightingale, in praise of moon,
Begins chanting a soothing song,
The charming vista is a boon,
Surely, to nirvana, it belongs.

As the bright moonlit night leaves, the craving hearts say,
"Forever-long, wish the aura would stay this way."

© Steve S., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I feel like I have fallen in love with moonlit night. The inspiration is obvious from the poem's title. I've composed it to inspire other hearts which are unaware of night's beauty - the bewitching beauty of the moonlit night!
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.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 11:32 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Amazing. 5/5!! ^ ^
Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 5:58 am
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Sure :) :) :)
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 3:09 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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thanks 2000
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 3:05 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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thanks! I'd be glad if you could check my other poems  
Paigers97 GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 2:10 am
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I love how descriptive it is. I find that a night with a full moon is quite pretty.
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 2:02 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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thanks colors
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 2:01 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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&quot;The important thing is not to stop questioning.&quot; ~Einstein

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thanks teedy
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 1:59 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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thanks! word
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 1:54 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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thanks Madiha
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 1:52 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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thanks for the feedback
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 1:42 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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thanks fo the comment
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 1:35 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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thanks!!! nice to get comment from you
MysticLady said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 11:16 pm
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This is very pretty and you write really well. Thanks for letting me read.  
Honour SILVER said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 2:34 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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Great poem, good job.
AnushLoveee17 GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 2:27 pm
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This is a great poem great poem good job
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 2:14 pm
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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Thanks to all friends for the comments and for their views!!!
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 2:12 pm
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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Thanks! After the board exams, let's compose a poem together, in poetry chatbox. What do you say?
Hamzawaseem GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 11:54 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

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thanks, here's my song lyrics. It's not very good, but do check it out TeenInk.com/poetry/song_lyrics/article/516211/Thoughts-on-Childhood/
SerenX SILVER said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 6:45 am
SerenX SILVER, Keenesburg, Colorado
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I really like the imagery here. However I feel like the last line could use some work. It doesn't flow as nicely as the rest of the poem. Over all a very nice job!
MoniS said...
on Jan. 4 2013 at 10:52 pm
fantastic i luv this poem................................................