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was it i?

November 18, 2013
By JSlip SILVER, Kalispell, Montana
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...and if he cant learn to love you than you should leave him. -TUPAC SHAKUR

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Was it I who was willing
Or I who was beast
Was it I who was least
When your dreams were fulfilling
Was it I you were killing
With pieces unleashed
You made me believe
It was your dreams you were filling
Was it ever that way
The love that was there
or maybe you’d say
what I wanted to hear
was it I who had faith
while you led my dreams there?

© April P., Newark, DE

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