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The Red-Eyed Devil

June 23, 2010
By its_just_me PLATINUM, Greensburg, Pennsylvania
its_just_me PLATINUM, Greensburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the amount of breath's you take, but by the moments that take your breath away.


I need blood and death to survive. I was born with a disease never heard of by man. Every night, I have to kill someone in a bloody death. Tonight, I'm gonna take you with me on my killing spree.

As I walk through the streets, I pull up my hood. People like to take my picture after i've killed someone. My eyes are scarlet, like blood.

As I'm walking, I hear a couple fighting. When i look through the window, I see the man hitting the woman. He does it as if he has done it many times before.

I wait for the woman to leave before I walk into the apartment. The man is asleep on a La-Z Boy recliner. I grab a knife from the kitchen and walk towards him.

I slice down both his arms and both his legs. he finally wakes up when i retrace those wounds with the knife. The sent of blood fills the air all around me.

Right when he starts to beg me to save his life, I stab the knife straight through his heart. Those lifeless eye stare at me accusingly. When I walk out of the building, I see the guys wife.

As I'm walking down the sidewalk, I hear his wife scream. She must have seen his body. When I am about half way back to my house, a man jumps out of the bushes. He has a camera. I throw my hand over my face just as he snaps the picture. He got one of my eyes.

I can't wait to see the papers tomorrow! I'm probably on the front page! My life's dream! I get to be in the paper as a freak that kills to live. Great. Why couldn't I just be normal?

They say God works in mysterious ways. I'm learning just how mysterious on how mysterious those ways can be. I wish I didn't know.

So, now you've been through a typical night with me. Creeped out? I would be surprised if you weren't. I got over the shock after I grew up enough to realize that this is my way of life. I'm just not shocked anymore.



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on Jul. 11 2010 at 4:58 pm
TheMalfunctioningWallflower BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;GET THE CAT!!!&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;I did wood paneling.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Do not FEAR the Crooked Zipper!! EMBRACE the Crooked Zipper!!!&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;What&#039;s better than infinity?&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Wear your helmets, we&#039;ll be reaching speeds of three!&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;You could walk on your hands and catch up to him!&quot;

I like it. It has the sadness of someone who has to do that. A curse.

on Jul. 8 2010 at 7:31 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker<br /> We cannot change the cards we&#039;re dealt just how we play the hand<br /> Experience is what you get when you didn&#039;t get what you wanted<br /> It&#039;s pretty easy to be smart when you&#039;re parroting smart people<br /> -Randy Pausch

That was amazing, chilling and vivid.  Very interesting, well-written and unique.  Excellent job.  Keep writing!

Btw, will you check out and comment on my work?


on Jul. 6 2010 at 12:41 pm
crzybookworm BRONZE, Highland, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The only thing to fear is fear itself.&quot;

It was okay...A little creepy. Very descriptive but the idea of the story is original. Try to add some more to it.

on Jun. 30 2010 at 7:05 pm
_Lia_Aqua_ SILVER, Moorhead, Minnesota
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this was cool, and a little creepy lol. I like it and you did a good job discribing this.

BTW could you check out my work please?