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be careful little eyes what you see

September 11, 2013
By brb00bookworm SILVER, Clanton, Alabama
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The best way to cheer yourself up is to cheer up someone else.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> Mark Twain

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We all look into the world and see things not one person should see. We violence and hatred, war and maybe peace. Love, life, and death. The things we see can ruin us, or they could make us rich. We fight an unending battle. to keep our sights pure.
Just be careful little eyes what you see. for if you don't that little sight can change your life forever.

© Sabine N., Cincinnati, OH

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It was inspired by the things teens can see and how they can effect us.
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brb00bookworm SILVER said...
on Dec. 18 2013 at 1:29 pm
brb00bookworm SILVER, Clanton, Alabama
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
The best way to cheer yourself up is to cheer up someone else.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> Mark Twain

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thanks i like to think i'm a good writer and it is nice to hear that from someone other than my older sister brittbritt101
TanazMasaba GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2013 at 2:36 am
TanazMasaba GOLD, Dhaka, Other
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&quot;You&#039;ve gotta dance like there&#039;s nobody watching,<br /> Love like you&#039;ll never be hurt,<br /> Sing like there&#039;s nobody listening,<br /> And live like it&#039;s Heaven on Earth.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ---William W. Purkey

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Hey there beth...I am tanaz from the buddy list...so about your story...Its a very short article but a well written article no doubt...just becareful of some small grammar and tense and spelling errors okay? Other than that I found no problems. You're pretty good writer so keep on writing :) *thumbs up*
brittbritt101 said...
on Nov. 2 2013 at 9:32 am
brittbritt101, Clanton, Alabama
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love is patient love is kind it does not envy or bost<br /> Never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.

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i cant wait to read your book. sis you are an amazing person and i hope one day you will be up in the big leagues of writing love you