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Thoughts of a Gunshot Victim
He heard an angel calling his name. That was what it sounded like, at least. The blinding pain filled his chest. He knew that it hadn?t entered into his heart, not his lungs, but somewhere still vital.
Things were fading. Sounds, objects, the voice (for there was only one) and his life. It was all fading.
His heart was faltering, and he smiled and closed his eyes.
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You accomplished a lot in a short while. You could leave it as is (though it defintely needs the title to better explain the situation!) or you could add it to a story somewhere else. You're very descriptive.