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More than a Dream

June 11, 2009
By Lynette BRONZE, Rio Grande, Texas
Lynette BRONZE, Rio Grande, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Love is when the other person&#039;s happiness is more important than your own.&rdquo;<br /> H. Jackson Brown,Jr.


The wind blew steadily through the trees naked branches. The moon was bright illuminating our way down a narrow path. A single brown strand of my hair brushed my frozen cheek. We stopped in silence my hand held safely in his as a hundred flowers came into view.

My heart threatened to burst out of my chest. Instinctively, my hand tightened around his and I blinked back tears of ultimate happiness. His eyes met mine making my face burst with emotion.


“How’d you get all these in fall?” I laughed embracing him tightly as I nodded my head towards the flowers.


He pulled me back and smiled. His eyes twinkled a million responses…” I love you.”

The author's comments:
It was a dream......

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on Aug. 6 2009 at 2:17 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

great job! and i love the idea you got from a dream and used it in writing. i liked this dream :) good job! check out some of my work :)

on Jun. 23 2009 at 2:41 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

Simply BEAUTIFUL! i wish i had dreams like that. Mine are more like being chased by an evil TV remote and i wake up remembering i forgot to turn off my TV! lol. THanks for commenting on my work!

on Jun. 17 2009 at 7:53 pm
MoreThanYouKnow PLATINUM, Camarillo, California
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thats amazing i wish i had dreams as good as this one! and thanx 4 the comments on my work!!!