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If I said I love you...

September 17, 2009
By LeighAnn Wolle BRONZE, Springfield, Illinois
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If I told you I loved you?
Would you say it too?
Or would I be alone.
Trapped in a Taylor Swift tone Would there be a love story,
or is there no such glory.
Will there be a force,
or no white horse?
If I said I love you,
Would we be through????

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amber A. said...
on Oct. 25 2012 at 3:18 pm
definetly a word artist. I  love  it!!
amber A. said...
on Oct. 25 2012 at 3:18 pm
definetly a word artist. I  love  it!!
sullierosex3 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 25 2012 at 9:44 am
sullierosex3 BRONZE, Teaneck, New Jersey
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embrace your flaws, there what makes you unique.

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LOVE this <3
Fia-fia BRONZE said...
on Nov. 8 2011 at 10:21 am
Fia-fia BRONZE, Bethesda, Maryland
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Though this is a poem, it is really nice. Most girls can relate competely, so very nice job. Very simple, but a good message, Thank you

:)

smilesunshine PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 3 2011 at 3:47 pm
smilesunshine PLATINUM, Puyallup, Washington
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&quot;If you&#039;re lucky enough to be different from everyone else, don&#039;t change to be the same.&quot; ~Taylor Swift

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Love this. :) Partially because I know the feeling... :P 

The Taylor Swift reference is perfect. :)

And this whole thing is so true... those three words can scare a man off in an instant.

myLovelyFather GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2011 at 1:19 pm
myLovelyFather GOLD, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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And that&#039;s the thing about the future. It&#039;s unknown, unknowable, but before you know it, you&#039;re there.

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'they' being other woman or girls.
myLovelyFather GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2011 at 1:18 pm
myLovelyFather GOLD, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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And that&#039;s the thing about the future. It&#039;s unknown, unknowable, but before you know it, you&#039;re there.

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it's really sad, but yeah . . . some guys will say they're through. i like that this is like a warning, a heads-up, to stop before they break, or fall. only tell a man you love him when you are ready. and if he's worth your love, he'll say he loves you back.
sifidragon12 said...
on Apr. 24 2011 at 6:32 pm
sifidragon12, Springfield, Massachusetts
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I really loved this. I can relate to it
loveisafriendshiponfire said...
on Apr. 23 2011 at 11:27 am
loveisafriendshiponfire, Montgomery, Texas
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omg!!! this is wonderful!! i'm a song writer and i was wondering if i may use part of this to inspire my song?? i'll give all credit towards you for your inspiration.
pklightning9 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 3:41 pm
pklightning9 BRONZE, West Halifax, Vermont
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&quot;Take the first step in faith, you don&#039;t have to see the whole staircase, just take the first step.&quot;<br /> -Martin Luther King

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This is really nice and it makes one wonder what would happen to everything they do and say. It is awesome!
Rainbowmadhatter said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 10:30 am
Rainbowmadhatter, Reno, Nevada
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i also really like how you realted to Taylor Swift and you mentioned the white horse.

short

simple

cute

pure brillince

smilesunshine PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 4 2011 at 9:05 pm
smilesunshine PLATINUM, Puyallup, Washington
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&quot;If you&#039;re lucky enough to be different from everyone else, don&#039;t change to be the same.&quot; ~Taylor Swift

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I like how you talked about Taylor Swift. It's really cute and meaningful. It's cool. :) This is really good.
HopeForever said...
on Jan. 4 2011 at 5:16 pm
Don't forget the "Will there be a love story." That's Taylor Swift too.
xprezzionstar BRONZE said...
on Jan. 4 2011 at 10:37 am
xprezzionstar BRONZE, Jeffersonville, Kentucky
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All it takes it 20 seconds of insane courage and I promise you, something amazing will happen

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i like it thats all there is to it
ShannonVictoria BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2010 at 4:35 pm
ShannonVictoria BRONZE, Dutch Haror, Alaska
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&quot;Love takes time. Don&#039;t keep asking random people to go out with you. If you wait, God will send the right person to you. But if you don&#039;t, then you may never find the one you&#039;re destend to be with.&quot; -Shannon McConnell

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Cute! :) <3
livingmylife4512 SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2010 at 5:46 pm
livingmylife4512 SILVER, Pleasant Plains, Illinois
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Any lyric by The Maine or Never Shout Never<br /> &quot;I am I, you are you, we are we, we could live in such harmony&quot;

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I think your writing is very good. You have a talent (:
Cammie said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 9:41 pm

U r so good.

This is sweet.

So many can relate to this.

weebnini DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 12 2010 at 10:38 pm
weebnini DIAMOND, San Diego, California
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&quot;Done &amp; Over&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Anyone can give up, it&#039;s the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that&#039;s true strength.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;People should be able to say how they feel. How they really feel. Not, you know, some words that some strangers put in their mouth.&quot;

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:O awwww~ :) cute
TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2010 at 1:03 am
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
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lovee love lovee Taylor Swift and the way she can connect with her audience so well, as well as you.
ashkash95 SILVER said...
on Jun. 20 2010 at 7:58 pm
ashkash95 SILVER, New Hyde Park, New York
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&quot;Love never fails.&quot; 1 Corinthians 13:8

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super cute. i love the taylor swift reference! :)