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what should've been perfect

December 28, 2010
By natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don't worry so much.


He bent slowly and kissed me gently upon my lips. Had I know this would be the last time we would share anything like this, I wouldn't have been embarrassed by my mother or my brother. I would have pulled him into the biggest hug I'd ever given anyone and held him close and whispered to him, "please...don't ever let me go..." had I know this would be the last night we'd spend together when he grabbed my hand like he had many times before, I would've never let go. After all had gone wrong the fist time that is, I can't believe what a witch I was..scratch that what a b**** I was when he was nothing but nice. But that b**** in me came out only after the other b**** told me he was ending it, but I guess there's somethings you never should believe. I'm not sure why I believed her in the first place, she never did tell the truth. He was so nice and I was a downright snob to him like I was so much better that he...but that was a lie and I should've just said I was sorry, sorry for everything even stuff that didn't need apologizing for, but its too late for any of that now. Too late for second chances, I'm sorrys, and it was my faults. Yes , its to late for one more hug goodbye, for goodnight kisses, for please never let me goes...its to late for everything that could've been and at one point was...perfect.



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on Jan. 5 2011 at 10:13 pm
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
13 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don't worry so much.

in a good way i hope? =)

on Jan. 5 2011 at 10:13 pm
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
13 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don't worry so much.

sorry to say but in real life he did die...too soon at that. im hoping to continue this story with a more happy ending than what happened in the real world.

on Jan. 1 2011 at 12:05 am
Supriya PLATINUM, Palampur, Other
20 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poetry spills from the cracks of broken heart, but flows from the one which is loved.

interesting..

on Dec. 30 2010 at 11:02 pm
Deszy6028 PLATINUM, Mansfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
You write such pretty word, but lifes no story book. Loves and excuse to get hurt, and to hurt. Do you like to hurt, I do. I DO! Then hurt me.

When I started reading this I thought that the boy died, but the end suprised me. You should keep writing this was a really good peice.