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Misery

November 21, 2011
By Twinwriterz SILVER, Vienna, Virginia
Twinwriterz SILVER, Vienna, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You must stay drunk of writing so reality cannot crush you&quot; Ray Bradbury<br /> &quot;A man can live 2 months on a good compliment&quot; Mark Twain<br /> &quot;It does not matter how slow you go so long as you do not stop.&quot;<br /> <br /> ..and alot more...


Pain, guilt, sorrow, and anger; white hot rage. That is all I have been feeling for the past six years, ever since the accident. I don't know why it was called the accident considering it wasn't one. Those boys shouldn't have been so thick-headed. I was only six years old when it happened, but I was smart enough to understand that my brother was gone, and that he had been murdered.



We had been very close, all through my life. i had loved him more than anyone, even my parents. When I lost him, I had felt helpless and bewildered. Who would have killed someone so nice? I still haven't gotten over it. My parents don't know what to do, they can't stop the unceasing tears and tantrums.



I can feel it overcoming me now. I am used to it though. It starts in my chest and climbs up my throat, burning me. It drives me crazy. My face flushes red with ire. A scream builds in my throat, and my legs become wobbly. I fall to my knees, and the scream escapes my lips. I am outside, and the cold burns in my throat as I breath hard. "Casey!" My father shouts in a rough voice. He picks me up and carries me to the car. "Lets go for a drive." I ignore him, and stare at the steadily falling snow outside my window. I press my hand against the window, and bring it to my face. The cold feels good, and it sharpens my senses.


The author's comments:
This is just a begenning of a story...
(Sk1)
Im not that good a writer, but it is about a girl who's brother got murdered by a group of teenage boys, They were mad at him for some reason and yeah... Hope you like it!

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on Nov. 27 2011 at 4:06 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

wow....im not sure why this is in the romance section but its a very good and VERY powerful short story. i think if you gave more detail it could be even better but this is still really very good