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The Story of Us

June 3, 2012
By theadventuresofemma GOLD, Ontario, Other
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theadventuresofemma GOLD, Ontario, Other
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For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others.<br /> For beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness.<br /> And for poise walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.<br /> -Audrey Hepburn

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It was just me and you. When you told me you loved me. You told me we were forever. Just Emma and Caleb. That's what you told me. But what I wonder is why you lied to me. Why would you tell me something that was so untrue? Why would you rip my heart out of my chest for her? Tell me was she really worth it? Was that one time with her worth all our memories? All our great times together? I don't think so, but it wasn't my decision. Tell me did you really think I would never know? Well that was stupid considering it was my best friend. How stupid. I don't know how I ever loved you. With all your lies and deception. You told me you where going to write the story of us someday. But it looks like I beat you to it. And now it's to late. Because the story of us is over.

© Gabrielle A., Pensacola, FL

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L7SquariaN GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2012 at 3:35 am
L7SquariaN GOLD, Madison Heights, Virginia
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Love, Life, Loyalty, and Living Long Like Legends. That&#039;s that L7.

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Lol. "But it looks like I beat you to it." Game over. I agree with Daniel that this was quite engaging. And actually a new perspective of the "break-up". Instead of grieving and questioning herself, your "character" realizes the insignificance of the whole thing and rightfully places the blame on the other participant. Finally lol
theadventuresofemma GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2012 at 4:06 pm
theadventuresofemma GOLD, Ontario, Other
12 articles 2 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others.<br /> For beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness.<br /> And for poise walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.<br /> -Audrey Hepburn

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thanks dawin :) lol its not true i just made this up. lol
DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 12 2012 at 8:09 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

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That's wassup. This was really engaging. at first I was like oh another break up story. But yours was really good it got me to think your end was awesome. Suggestion add a little bit of detail.
theadventuresofemma GOLD said...
on Jun. 10 2012 at 5:03 pm
theadventuresofemma GOLD, Ontario, Other
12 articles 2 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others.<br /> For beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness.<br /> And for poise walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.<br /> -Audrey Hepburn

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thank you thats really incouraging!
theadventuresofemma GOLD said...
on Jun. 10 2012 at 5:03 pm
theadventuresofemma GOLD, Ontario, Other
12 articles 2 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others.<br /> For beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness.<br /> And for poise walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.<br /> -Audrey Hepburn

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thanks so much!
dreamer7697 said...
on Jun. 10 2012 at 3:04 pm
I liked it emma:) great job !!!
vazenitran98 said...
on Jun. 10 2012 at 7:21 am
vazenitran98, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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&quot;I had the blues because I had no shoes until upon the street,I met a man who had no feet.&quot;

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Nice and intrigueing. Not really a story,but I did enjoy the concept of the point. This was great. Write more,like I tell almost everyone because people have great talents within them and I hope yours is one that  would finally turn into something big!