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Killed for Love

November 8, 2013
By GracieMay SILVER, Brownsville, Oregon
GracieMay SILVER, Brownsville, Oregon
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Writing is a form of therapy; sometimes I wonder how all those who do not write, compose or paint can manage to escape the madness, melancholia, the panic and fear which is inherent in a human situation.<br /> Graham Greene


I can't do this anymore I've been waiting day and night for weeks, just waiting for that perfect moment to ask him if he likes me, I just can't do it, every time he sees me he smiles that perfect smile with his faded blue eyes and his dirty blonde hair, sure he's not perfect but to me he's my world and I'm scared he'll reject me, I'm scared he'll walk away like all the other jerks did, I'm scared that my whole world will fall if he says no and then I'll be back to myself, the same old Lillian Glenn with blond hair and icy blue eyes who's five foot four and reads too much. I just can't let myself sit here and do nothing can I? In the midst of my thoughts I hear my phone ring, I pick it up expecting to hear Abby's familiar voice on the other end but instead I hear a male voice and I almost shriek into the phone "Hello?" I ask trying to contain my excitement.

"Hello is this Lillian?"
"In the flesh," I said suddenly regretting my stupid answer.

He laughed into the phone "ok well I was just calling to ask when I can come over to work on our science project,"

I sighed of course my day dream was too good to be true "Um how about tomorrow, does that work?" I ask looking at my science book to see the project.

"No I have a date with Mattie tomorrow how about Saturday?" I cringed I had forgot that he was dating popular Mattie Ross with flowing brown hair with blonde streaks and chocolate brown eyes that could melt any guy she laid eyes on.
"Yeah sure Saturday works how about two?"

"okay that works for me see you Saturday," he said hanging up. I fell onto my bed wishing I was pretty and popular and that I was dating Dillon Carson, Captain of the football team and the cutest guy alive. After five minutes of self pity the phone rang again but this time I wasn't astonished when I heard Dillon's voice he usually calls twice when we have a project
"Hey Lillian your super smart right?" He asked without a hello.
"Yeah I guess why?"

"Um what does I don't think this relationship is working out means?"
I sucked down the excitement bubbling inside of me and answered " It means she's either seeing other people or she wants to break up with you"

"Oh okay thanks" he said hanging up. I squealed in delight the guy I have a huge crush on is single! I quickly called Abby and told her the news and we both squealed into the phone like a twelve year old.

The next day I could barely contain myself I was humming around the house like a five year old and singing A thousand years through all my chores. I got dirty looks from my younger brother as I was humming while doing the laundry
"you strange" he said in his three year old voice.

I winked at him and gave him a big grin "I'm die hard happy," I said walking up the stairs carelessly. I left him stranded downstairs trying to figure out what happened with his sixteen year old sister. When I got upstairs I dropped my laundry and dashed to my bed, my phone was gone, there was a note that took its place, it read "dear, Lillian if you want your phone back meet me at the lake at sundown, Dillon." I covered my mouth in disbelief why me? why would he like a plain faced girl who has a passion for history? I questioned sitting on my bed, before I could question myself further I looked out my window and saw Abby downstairs obviously agitated because her phone was clenched tight to her chest. I dashed down the stairs to meet Abby, When I reached the front door it was wide open I ran up to Abby and hugged her wondering what was the matter, before I could ask she spoke "Dillon died" she said at a low whisper. I clutched at my throat waiting for her to laugh and say she was joking but she was only quiet waiting for my reaction I sat down in the hall and sobbed I was supposed to meet him tonight, who killed him? why? "Mattie killed him, she was overcome with jealousy when she heard about you and Dillon meeting tonight," said Abby as though she could read by thoughts I only sobbed harder my crush died at my enemy's feet, I was only happy that he didn't die in her arms. That night I snuck out to the lake wondering what would have happened if he hadn't been killed would he have kissed me? asked me out? my questions drifted out to sea, I stayed there all night thinking of him, only to feel the grief that the morning brought because he was gone and would never return.


The author's comments:
what inspired me to write this piece was my enemy who was dating my crush and the jealousy she had when he dumped her and had a crush on me.

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on Nov. 16 2013 at 2:30 pm
Wonderful twists and turns!  I really enjoyed the description and detail you weaved throughout your story.

on Nov. 16 2013 at 9:35 am
Sydney.R.D BRONZE, Duluth, Minnesota
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Once upon a time I dreamed I was a bird. And I tried to fly...<br /> <br /> ThoughI did not know how...<br /> <br /> Flying Lessons: Think of something you love to do. Feel your heart get lighter. Start to soar.

I was reading this and durring the begining I could even feel the characters feelings, partially because I've felt that way before, but also because this piece was written so well.  Then the twist came, and I wold have never guessed that would've happened!  I even cried when Abby told Lillian that Dillon had died.  You write so well, I loved your piece :)

on Nov. 16 2013 at 1:16 am
Mr._Poetry GOLD, Brownsville, Oregon
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Some people create with words or with music or with a brush and paints. I like to make something beautiful when I run. I like to make people stop and say, &#039;I&#039;ve never seen anyone run like that before.&#039; It&#039;s more than just a race, it&#039;s a style. It&#039;s doing something better than anyone else. It&#039;s being creative.<br /> Steve Prefontaine

good story I like how you gave the twist ending.

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on Nov. 15 2013 at 3:25 pm
Dalia... GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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&ldquo;Fear is not real. It is a product of thoughts you create. Now do not misunderstand me, danger is very real. But fear is a choice.&rdquo; &ndash;Cypher Raige

OMG this is really goooddd!!! I cried at the engind ;( lol you are a really good writer so don't stop writing :D