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Butterfly Collection

November 7, 2015
By MVReverie GOLD, Arlington, Texas
MVReverie GOLD, Arlington, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
I can't drown my demons; they know how to swim.


I don’t know why she brought me out here. It was so frigging cold out here! Maybe I should have worn warmer clothes… I look at the tombstone that’s right next to us.  ‘James Warn’ it says. I hope he doesn't mind we're here. I look over to her, and I grin. Her nose and cheeks were so pink. I held her hand lightly, being careful. She was a like a butterfly with hidden wings; her wings, they were her dreams. Her enormous dreams that took over her, sheltered her, protected her. Yet these wings, they were fragile, so easy to break, but, they continued to stay strong and carry her. I leaned a bit closer, she leaned closer. 



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on Nov. 13 2015 at 6:20 pm
ThisEmilyDa1 SILVER, BF, New Mexico
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only a life lived for others is a life worthwhile<br /> -Albert Instien<br /> the only person you should try to be better than is the person you were yesterday.

Ahhh, okay I see. Very nice then!

MVReverie GOLD said...
on Nov. 13 2015 at 10:48 am
MVReverie GOLD, Arlington, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 10 comments

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I can&#039;t drown my demons; they know how to swim.

Vignettes are one of the few exceptions with run on sentences, actually. Vignettes are like snapshots of life, in other words, it's like your describing a certain moment in time.

on Nov. 13 2015 at 10:40 am
ThisEmilyDa1 SILVER, BF, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
only a life lived for others is a life worthwhile<br /> -Albert Instien<br /> the only person you should try to be better than is the person you were yesterday.

Ooohhhh, interesting. Good job. A few run on sentences to watch out for though. It was sweet and simple, quite beautiful actually. Good job, what are vinigettes though?