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June 6, 2023
By michellebi BRONZE, Oak Park, California
michellebi BRONZE, Oak Park, California
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The magicfolk make no promises.

For all her life, the proverb had echoed in the kingdom, no matter which way she turned. It was a scolding used on children, a line tossed out by history teachers, but most of all, a constant whispering among the commoners. Every unexpected raindrop, everygrating  crack of thunder was because of those people. The magicfolk had been exiled from the kingdom centuries ago for breaking the natural laws, and they’d lived away from society in the wild ever since.

Now the words roared to life inside Natalya’s head for the thousandth time, too insistent to ignore. No promises. No promises.

This forest, dappled with sunlight in the day, became a different beast with the rise of the moon. Shadows reached for her, tearing at her lantern’s glow. The trees around her loomed larger every second. These woods were alive, and every rustle and movement she couldn’t quite see was an intimidating reminder.

Yet the squat stone cottage she stood in front of looked utterly mundane, a normal sight transposed into a doubled world.

“Hello?” she called, her voice shaky. “My name is Natalya, and I’d like to make a deal.”

The door opened quickly, and a shadow fell across the ground, silhouetted by golden light. Silence hung in the air for a moment, storm-cloud threatening.

“Who are you?”

The voice was higher than she was expecting, shaded with anxiety instead of poise. She lifted her head tentatively. Standing there was not the infamous wizard of legend, but a girl who looked just as young as her.

“I was told the wizard lived here,” Natalya said, light-headed.

The girl lifted her chin defiantly. Her dark brown hair was cut unevenly at her chin; a woven grass crown, beginning to shrivel, rested on top of her head. “He died last year,” she gritted out. “I’m his daughter. Not that you’d know.” Her gaze flicked up and down Natalya’s flowy orange dress, tucked under a modest brown cloak. “You’re clearly royalty.”

“I need a hypnosis potion,” Natalya said. She shifted her stance, displaying a satchel slung across her side. “I brought a hundred copper coins to pay. A lot of money in the city.”

The stranger scoffed. “What makes you think I want to live in your city, princess?”

“Kitaeri is the greatest city in the land,” Natalya objected, thinking of the busy streets and the bustling markets, the constant chorus of voices. But those thoughts were quickly replaced with darker ones, of bloodshed and conflict and the king. Her father. On his head, the monarch’s crown looked less like a circlet of gemstone flowers than a ring of thorns. 

“What’s that?” the girl asked, pointing to Natalya’s golden necklace dripping with crystals. She’d forgotten she had it on.

“I’ll exchange it for the potion, if you’d like.”

“Deal,” the girl responded. She reached for the necklace, then snapped the clasp and pocketed it. Natalya’s breath hitched at the sudden proximity.

The other girl spun on her heel and beckoned her inside the cottage.

The first thing Natalya noticed when she crossed the threshold was the yellow fire warming a bubbling cauldron in the center of the room, flickering cheerily within a ring of stones. The walls were lined with shelves upon shelves of every wild thing imaginable. One glance revealed an extensive collection of herbs, another a cluster of jarred animal bones, and a third a rack of flowers in full bloom in the furthest corner.

“Name’s Lark, by the way.”

Natalya turned to the witch, who had a small feathered shape bobbing on her arm.

“You have a pet bird.” The idea was so human it made her feel ill.

“He’s not mine,” she said derisively. “He doesn’t belong to anyone.”

Natalya found herself holding her breath as Lark and the nightingale gazed at each other. Finally, the bird stretched his wings, fluttered out of the window,  and glided toward the treeline. “You can… talk to animals?”

“I don’t talk to them,” Lark said. She dropped a handful of herbs into the cauldron  and watched the solution bubble pearlescent. “I listen. And they listen back.”

Natalya felt her worldview twist. It was dizzying. “You know, my father told me that magicfolk only had destructive powers,” she observed. “That’s why you all were banished.”

Lark’s expression shuttered.

“Let’s go,” she said roughly, scooping the liquid into a small flask. “I have ingredients to gather, and I don’t trust you in my house alone.”

* * *

With Lark around, the forest was all muffled sounds and quiet birdsong, all its angles a little less severe, edges a little less sharp. As she walked quickly through the undergrowth, Natalya trailing her like a comet’s tail, the plants seemed to exhale in relief at Lark’s presence.

“So, princess, what do you even need this hypnosis potion for?” Lark cast Natalya a side glance. “The spell only works on one person for twelve hours, in case you wanted to know.”

“Please don’t call me ‘princess,’” Natalya said. “I don’t like to be reminded that I’m related to the king.”

“Is Evenfall struggling that much under his rule?”

Natalya almost laughed. “You don’t know?”

“I’ve lived in the forest all my life, with my father.” Her expression changed. “At least, until last year.”

“Oh,” Natalya said quietly. The magicfolk make no promises. She had no way to know if this witch was telling the truth, but there was a tinge of real emotion in Lark’s voice, as if a singer had held a note too long and her voice was about to shatter.

She thought about her own father, lecturing her a decade ago as a child when she’d strayed out of the sunlight and into the shade of the trees. He’d picked her up and held her to his face, eyes piercing and trained upon her own. There are animals in there, he’d warned, but they look just like us.

“Tell me about the king,” Lark demanded now. Natalya looked over, noticing how she canted her face at an angle so she couldn’t see. “My only news comes from chatty animals and talkative tree roots.”

Natalya sighed. “He started a war with Aether eight years ago, when I was ten, and another with Amaranth last year. We’re running out of money, but he just keeps going. There’s not enough shelter or food to go around. More soldiers die every day, and…” Her voice cracked. “It’s horrible.”

They arrived in another forest glade, where Lark began picking delicate herbs from the ground. She dropped them into the flask, the liquid bubbling and turning a paler silver with each addition. “So that’s why you need this hypnosis potion,” she said softly. “You can’t stand your father anymore.”

“Yes,” Natalya said, like it would become more than just a truth if she tried hard enough.

* * *

Next to a patch of glowing mushrooms, Lark knelt and closed her eyes. “What are you doing now?” Natalya asked curiously.

There was no response. Lark pressed her palms down on the grass as if feeling for something. A shaft of moonlight highlighted her body like an iridescent spotlight, and she looked like a statue, a relic of a forgotten time.

Natalya hovered in the shadows, floating in limbo.

A tense minute later, Lark stood up, her expression stormy. “Feeling for damage,” she said. “Remember those wars you citydwellers started?”

“We did that?” Natalya blurted out as Lark plucked a clump of tiny mushrooms from the soil and added them to the potion. “And aren’t you hurting those things right now?”

“That’s different,” Lark snapped. “I respect life. I acknowledge it; I see the cosmic cycle of it all. The wars happening, on the other hand, are being carried out without any thought for nature. Every day, armies burn the forests to ashes on their marches. They send the animals fleeing from their homes. All of those living creatures? They’re just obstacles on the king’s way to conquering more territory.”

“I didn’t know it was that extensive,” Natalya said, a little stunned.

Lark seemed to struggle internally for a moment, then yanked Natalya down to sit on the cool grass with her. “Listen,” she ordered.

The world stopped breathing as Lark leaned in closer to Natalya. Their foreheads met in an intimate touch, and her skin felt like it was lighting up with electricity, lightning fizzing through her body. She tasted Lark’s breath against her face, felt hands cupping her cheeks, the sound in her head building to a hum of feverish warmth, then-

A scream.

Natalya gasped and pulled away. The sound, tortured and keening, echoed against the inside of her skull. She felt like she’d just come up from the bottom of a lake, a heavy weight sloughing off her shoulders. “What was that?”

In the starlight, she caught a glimpse of a tear tracking its way down Lark’s face. “The forest,” she said quietly. “I can hear it, and I let you hear it for a moment too.”

The sound still rang in Natalya’s ears as she stood up shakily. “That voice…” she whispered. It reminded her of the cries that echoed through the streets every week when the names of the fallen soldiers came back. It was a public display of grief, a cry for a missing piece of this world, never to be part of the intricate puzzle of life again.

Suddenly Natalya could see the battlefields that stitched Evenfall to the rest of the land as if they stood right in front of her, soldiers falling, blood spilling, the clanging of swords drowning out the birdsong. And the forest, always the forest, cut down because it dared to stand in the way. These trees, their roots stretching into the earth and pulling life from the soil, set ablaze, phoenixes that would never hatch again.

“Sometimes I have ideas,” she murmured. “Of how to make it all better.”

Lark smiled for the first time: surprisingly soft, achingly beautiful. “Well, what good is a story left unspoken?”

The moonlight froze them together like insects in amber, time slowing down like honey in the afternoon. The sounds of the forest faded around them as the other girl’s eyes caught Natalya in their gravity.

Then Lark stepped back; the flowers reached toward her like she was the sun itself. “You know the stars don’t align for people like us,” Natalya said.

Lark’s eyes were lost planets, unfathomably deep. “Then we’ll rearrange them ourselves,” she said, and held out her hand.

Natalya took it.

* * *

The flask shone violet in the light of the glowing trees above them, amethyst and stardust cupped by delicate blown glass. “It’s almost done,” Lark said, shaking it slightly. “We only need one more thing. Luckily, it’s…” She moved to part several bushes, revealing a river. “...right here.”

The two of them picked their way down to the bank. The currents swirled and danced like snowflakes, quick and graceful. They flashed colors she didn’t have names for as they moved, their rushing a song in Natalya’s ears. She took a step closer, then another, lost in its blinding, binding depths.

Then Lark’s hand alighted on her shoulder, bringing her back. “Don’t look at the water,” she warned. “It traps you.”

Slowly, carefully, the witch drew closer and scooped some water into the potion flask. The river seemed to pause to think, then a hazy scene spun into view. A child in a forest clearing, mouth open in a silent laugh. Beside her, a slender man looked at her sternly, but her words morphed his frown into a smile. He rested a grass circlet on her head.

The water spun, whirling ahead. Lark backed up, but the river kept going. “It shows your past and future,” she said defeatedly. “It’s always been cursed.”

“That’s you?” Natalya said in wonder, watching the girl grow and stretch, the roundness melting from her face. She saw a younger Lark lifting her hands upward in a dignified motion, a sapling bursting from the ground and into full bloom. Racing through the woods on the back of a stag. Bowing her head by a patch of freshly turned dirt, her father nowhere to be found.

“I’m sorry,” Natalya said faintly, but her attention was still captivated by the river. It had drifted out of focus, the figures becoming blurry, and she realized that this was Lark’s future.

She watched, entranced, as Lark grew older with the grace of the trees she lived among. She walked the woods every daybreak and spoke with her nightingale friend when dusk fell. Her hair grayed, her magic faded. Her grass crown was preserved in gold now, the gold of Natalya’s necklace.

And then she was kneeling softly in the soil, eyes lined deeply with age. The breeze melted her into a blaze of red-gold leaves that scattered, leaving nothing behind.

“Well, that’s it,” Lark said, turning to leave. But Natalya moved closer, curiosity flaming inside of her. Once again, the river paused and burbled, then a young girl with golden hair and a keen gaze floated to the surface.

“Me,” Natalya breathed. Lark folded her arms, but her eyes remained on the scene playing out.

The girl grew up in a palace under the watchful eyes of her father, the king. He watched her mature, and she watched him drive the kingdom into ruin. But she was restless, aching for more. One night, she slipped a hood over her dress and snuck into the woods.

The waters went blurry.

Natalya left the woods, holding the potion. She poured the liquid into her sleeping father’s mouth. When he opened his eyes, he didn’t recognize his daughter.

She fled the kingdom, crossing into another realm unplagued by war. But the fighting reached her, like it reached everyone in the end, and she died in a fire set by attacking soldiers. Taking the world for themselves, no matter the cost.

When the pictures finally faded, she felt hollow. “That really is it,” she echoed.

“Wait,” Lark said. When Natalya turned to her, the witch’s expression was a new one, eyes narrowed, gaze as sharp as a knife. “You want this potion so you can… erase yourself from your father’s memory?”

“Yes, and run away,” Natalya said, suddenly on edge. “You said it yourself: I can’t stand him. And I don’t want Evenfall to be my home anymore.”

Lark’s face was stone in the moonlight. “This potion…” she said. “This potion is so powerful it could bring the king under your control.”

She began to pace. The plants swayed uncertainly. “I thought you wanted to change the world,” she said disbelievingly. “You could make him crown you queen. You could make things different with that kind of power. Save everyone.”

Natalya’s lungs weren’t working properly. “I’ve never wanted to be queen,” she said faintly, feeling like she was standing at the edge of a canyon, an inch away from falling.

Lark spun back to her, her fists clenched. “You want to make it all  better, though,” she pointed out, her tone dangerous. “You told me yourself. And now I remember why I’ve never helped citydwellers.” Her glare could carve stone. “You’re not worth it.”

Her eyes traced Natalya again, just like when they’d first met, hours ago, years ago. 

“Go,” she said quietly, pressing the potion into Natalya’s hands. She sounded uneven, broken by the betrayal of an almost-friend. “Get out of my forest.”

Natalya turned and ran homeward through the shadow-steeped landscape, her voice stolen from her throat, leaving Lark alone on the banks of the river. The moonlight stung her skin like a thousand broken promises.

* * *

Natalya stepped into her father’s room as the night came to its close. The elaborately curled columns and the furniture covered in gold felt alien to her eyes. In the corner, the gleaming crown sat locked away in its shiny glass case. Already, she longed for the soft forest grass, the gentle background noise of small creatures in the dark.

Lark’s words had taken up residence in her mind, and now every time she closed her eyes, she remembered her panicked flight. Running away, just like she’d planned.

If she were queen, she’d end the wars. No more bloodshed, no more families torn apart. She let herself imagine it as she moved to her father’s bedside. The flowers would bloom again.

Maybe she’d let the magicfolk back in too, she wondered fleetingly. 

Lark appeared in her brain in full color, soaked in the night’s serenity. What good is a story left unspoken?

She pulled back the bedsheets, seeing her father curled up. The man who ruptured their kingdom, tore their city in two, in ten. Natalya tipped the potion down his throat before she could hesitate any further, watching his limbs go slack. He was under her control.

Forget about me, she thought, heartbeat like a caged bird. Erase me from your brain. I’m going to run away, and I don’t need you to remember me and come searching.

His crown seemed to wink at her in the dawn light. She saw it again, a world without her father as king. It was right there on the tips of her fingers. She could end the wars and watch peace spread across the land, save the starving people on Kitaeri’s streets.

The river had shown her a future outside this realm. Except it wasn’t a future, not really. It was a life spent on the run, surviving instead of flourishing, until she went up in flames thirty years from now. If that was the ending, what was the point of it all?

Maybe it was fate.

Maybe it didn’t have to be.

The two paths ahead of her shot off in opposite directions. She could run, guarantee an existence for herself. Or she could stay in this palace and reshape this kingdom, show Kitaeri just how beautiful this city could be.

We’ll rearrange the stars ourselves, Lark had promised Natalya, her voice raw and aching and so, so human.

“Now, Father,” she said quietly, watching his eyes grow as wide and blank as the full moon, trapped under her gravity.

The sunrise was breaking over the horizon now, pinks and golds staining the sky. Somewhere in the forest, a nightingale began its song.

“Give me the crown.”


The author's comments:

I first wrote this piece way back in early 2021 for a spring-themed contest on Reedsy Prompts (you can find me on that website under the pen name Ellie Yu). I decided to revise it and resubmit here too.


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