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Broken Bliss Introduction

April 27, 2011
By twizzlerluva97 GOLD, New York City, New York
twizzlerluva97 GOLD, New York City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Success comes to those who persist after all have given up. Which is why it is never crowded along the extra mile."


Introduction:
The colors of that night were pretty much all I could remember. The redness of the blood all over the place so much blood. The colors in the toilet after I threw-up. All of them somehow connected to me. How I made them all be that way. My poor judgment in men. My carefree existence. God why did she have to break that stupid vase. That’s what started everything. I remember watching an episode of Buffy when I was little and I can’t really remember who the person really was but what they said was along the lines of “There are moments in your life that make you, sometimes they’re little subtle moments, sometimes they’re not. I’ll show you what I mean.”



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on Jun. 15 2011 at 7:00 am
twizzlerluva97 GOLD, New York City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Success comes to those who persist after all have given up. Which is why it is never crowded along the extra mile."

thanks! i have two of the first chapters cxheck it out and comment?

 


Ryssa BRONZE said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 4:40 am
Ryssa BRONZE, Kennebunk, Maine
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Don't think or judge, just listen. - Sarah Dessen, Just Listen

Wow, this is good! And the picture is perfect for the scene. Good job!