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Feedback on What He Gave to Me

February 7, 2019
By fionamei SILVER, New York City, New York
fionamei SILVER, New York City, New York
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   “What He Gave to Me” by Jane was such a heart-warming piece. It just shows how much one person can impact you. They light up your whole world. I was smiling from ear to ear as I read the essay. The author talks about what her boyfriend had given her: love, support, reassurance, a ring, and a bracelet. She explains how her life was before her boyfriend. It was described as lonely and she talks about how she barely felt strong. 

   It’s just so beautiful how someone can change your life completely. From going to someone who just felt lonely and incomplete to someone with their other half is the best transformation you can ask for. I absolutely love that Jane talks on the little things that make her feel complete. I just feel my heart burst. 



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