I think even not all of us know it, everyone has their own Loch Ness Monster, something they believe in to keep them from losing faith in everything.  Whether it is religious or pure fantasy, there is always that one thing that keeps us look attached to this world.  

   Sometimes one can doubt whether or not we really do believe in anything besides our own everyday lives, but, by reading "Finding the Loch Ness Monster," we can all see that our Loch Ness Mosnters are always there, even if others can see them or not.  If you can't seem to find yours, give it some time.  Maybe doing the things you love to do, like writing, in the author's case, can help you open your mind and discover things about yourself no one ever knew.

    This piece brings up a very important life lesson, or theme.  Congratulations on such an amazing piece, and I hope to read more!