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Call Me Charlie
Summary:
Charlotte is an imaginative young girl who can take on the entire world with only her mouth. But once she is forced to move to a small town in Idaho where the only other person living on her street is just as sarcastic and quick with words as herself, Charlotte finds knee-deep in a hostile "frenemy" relationship. As the war of words prolongs, Charlotte learns that Logan has a secret hidden behind his crocodile smile. Can they come to peace at last, or will bitter words be the only memories left?
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Annnnnd... DONE. Yay! First commenter to have read the whole thing! ;)
Anyways I think a 'congrats' is in order. CONGRATS...!
I looked at the novel, eyeing the number of chapters that slowly climbed up to ten and was like 'oh no, this is going to be long'. But it really wasn't. I found myself forgetting about teenink entirely and simply letting my mind take me through the emotional mountains and revenes of a girl faced with uncontrolable changes, and most of all, 'that annoying kid Logan'...! You are a very good writer!
Oh and I like the ending. I've never been good at emotional 'stuff' (for lack of a better word) and you pulled it off nicely ;)
My only quick critique is that you describe Logan's grin as 'crocodile' (nice use of words by the way) too many times. You can do it every so often but you might want to change it up a little (maybe a 'crooked' grin or a 'crawling' smile...?)
Oh, and one more thing. I totally agree with you on the snakes. Eww! I mean, even 'Indiana Jones' is afraid of snakes :P
Anyways good job ;)
Lol, im still in the middle (3rd chapter currently) and I like it! it's different!
However, I wish there was some more internal descriptions (like why she had a phobia... an accident like Dudley's perhaps? lol... Maybe you could explain how she felt when people called her "charlie".... )
Also, why did she call it "a mutated rat?" snakes arent like rats at all... lol
but so far, so good! ill keep reading when I get back from this grad party Im going to!
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"I am the master of my fate. I am the captain of my soul."- William Ernest Henley