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Wait for Me
January 12, 2011
Summary:
Roselyn is forced into marriage to a man she doesn't love. Until her best friend's brother comes back from studying to be a doctor in London. Full of jealousy and drama, romance and laughter, this is a short story that will capture you emotionally.
Faith S.
Wait for Me
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This book has 38 comments.
Oh I loved it! :D
It was so good! Made me laugh, made me wish to jump into the story and take Roslyn's place ;) It was really well written :) I applaud *claps*
Hmmm maybe a little more of the old time language weaved throughout it would help with the implied time it's set in..? Either way, i love it!
Keep writing! :D I'm on my way to explore some of your other work :)
It was so good! Made me laugh, made me wish to jump into the story and take Roslyn's place ;) It was really well written :) I applaud *claps*
Hmmm maybe a little more of the old time language weaved throughout it would help with the implied time it's set in..? Either way, i love it!
Keep writing! :D I'm on my way to explore some of your other work :)
FaithSnyder16 ELITE said...
on May. 26 2012 at 6:23 pm
Thanks so much nemish23! I looove Matthew ahahah I modeled him on my dream guy lol. I've started a novel and have a few of the rough draft chapters on here I've gone back and made changes but if you liked this one I think that you'd enjoy the novel! It's called My Dear Mr. Bishop, Thanks for commenting and I thanks you for the feedback! <3
FaithSnyder16 ELITE said...
on Mar. 20 2012 at 8:33 pm
Thanks so much nemish23! I looove Matthew ahahah I modeled him on my dream guy lol. I've started a novel and have a few of the rough draft chapters on here I've gone back and made changes but if you liked this one I think that you'd enjoy the novel! It's called My Dear Mr. Bishop, Thanks for commenting and I thanks you for the feedback! <3
FaithSnyder16 ELITE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 6:18 pm
Lost kitten,
I'm actually working on a full blown novel that this story inspired. I have I think the first 11 chapters up but It's not finished! Check it out and I thank you so much for reading this! I love the feed back you've given me and it made my day! :)
lostkitten37b said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 11:40 pm
I Just read your author's note. You should write more of these! I really liked the historical setting. More? Pretty please?
lostkitten37b said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 11:35 pm
Bwahaha, YES! Goodbye mister toad, hello handsome prince! Great story, by the way.
FaithSnyder16 ELITE said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 7:11 pm
Thanks Elephantshoes! I'm really glad you liked it!
LifesIllusion BRONZE said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 2:44 pm
I loved it! :) good job!
FaithSnyder16 ELITE said...
on Oct. 18 2011 at 2:55 pm
HEY ;) AKJNDFKJANFKJ AKJDBFKJAB
FaithSnyder16 ELITE said...
on Oct. 18 2011 at 2:55 pm
Thanks so much Meme! I do know I have a lot of grammar and spelling work to work on, and most of the stuff I post on here, is just rough drafts, and I'm acutally working on a novel that is inspired around this story, the charaters are different and the idea is similar and changed... Idk how to explain but I do have the first I think 8 chapters put up here if you'd like to check it out. I thank you for leaving your comments, it really made my day :) Thanks for reading!
meme said...
on Sep. 4 2011 at 11:36 pm
Wow this story is really well written other than the few mistakes in spelling and grammar. You have really nice ideas and a great sense of that romantic writing style. I honestly wished the story had more to it though, perhaps more complications. Other than that, brilliant! (:
FaithSnyder16 ELITE said...
on Sep. 4 2011 at 6:02 pm
Thanks! I love how STRAIGHT forward you were with me, and I just was told yesterday by my teacher that I've been spelling straight wrong all my life, and I'm 17 hahahah :D sooo huge fail on my part. Um, I've been working on my dialog alot and I've edited this since I put this on, and I think it's alot better, I know I sound like Jane Austen, and I think it's because I'm in loooove with this time period, and her work. I'm not intentionally trying to sound like her, I'm trying to be myself, and write the time period I like, but I see what you mean :)) I'm working on a novel in this time period, and have the draft on here, I'm sure I have the same problems but my teacher will pick it up when she reads it lol she's my editor.. lol. but thanks so much for the construtive critisism and I'm glad you liked it!
I think you have a really good start and some potential. But your work comes across to me as if you are trying to hard to be jane austen. Also, you sometimes switch from past tense to present. And some of your words were wrong, like "strait" instead of "straight" and "purpose" instead of "propose". I also think you should work on your dialogue, because it seems to switch a lot from old British speaking to modern terminology. Other than that, you have some strong characters and the mind of a writer. Keep writing!
FaithSnyder16 ELITE said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 7:35 pm
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it AND commented! I love hearing feedback and not gonna lie... it's given me a huge ego boost heheheh :)) Jk jk.. hahah thanks so much!
MiNdLeSsLuVeRgIrL BRONZE said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 6:18 pm
Love your work! I loved this story
FaithSnyder16 ELITE said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 4:37 pm
Thank so much!! :D I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it! I'll check it out!! :D
emilybwrites SILVER said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 1:22 pm
wow great story! it had me hooked! please check out my poem "Forgotten Domain" and comment/rate it. i love to get feedback from fellow writers
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